Yay for fluffy fanfiction

[just_keep_on]

Title: Lightly; sweetly

Comments

[shetan83]

Oh good, this is only chapter one.

I nearly fainted at the thought of Osa in a bikini... and then the implications of Asako undressing...

Congratulations. You nearly killed me. xO

[just_keep_on]

Heh. In the first draft, I completely forgot to write in the fact that Osa had been wearing a bathing suit, so of course I had to rectify that with a bikini ^___________^

I hope you'll find the next chapters faint-worthy as well~

[shetan83]

...Of course. Bikini. Only logical thing to do, really. @_@;

[just_keep_on]

*LOL!* Yup! Though, I was toying with the idea of Sena going skinny-dipping ... *evil laugh*

[windstar127]

*snicker* loved it.

[just_keep_on]

Thanks! I had this mad, maniacal grin the whole time I was writing it XD

[ashes_renee]

Ohhhhh....yes. I was all trying to eat grapefruit while I read it, but instead my eyes were just fixed all glassy-like on the screen, while my spoon fecklessly stabbed away at the innocent fruit until it looked like it was hit by a bus, cause I couldn't even spare a second to look at it. (The sign of an awesome fanfic)

Heh, and I really love the little text message at the beginning. It's so realistic of a real text. xD

[just_keep_on]

Can you believe that the text was the hardest part to write?? I was like, "How would Asako text?" 'Cause when I text, I actually write out words, even though it takes me *forever*

I hope the grapefruit was at least enjoyed after being hit by your bus!Spoon ^_^

[kugelfischli]

*hehe*
i was trying to eat while reading, too.. well, yes, trying.. *laughs*

[just_keep_on]

I've learned not to eat when reading fanfiction. I never know when I'll come across a really good one and end up with the food all over my desk rather than in my mouth O_o

[kugelfischli]

*yaaaaay*
chapter one means we do get more, right?
i liked it (really, i was just a few minutes before in a pretty bad mood and now.. i feel like giggling would be the best thing to do, thank you so much)
i can'T say it enough, we need an extra osa/asa community! *laughs*

[windstar127]

i have to agree with that one. who wants to start one?

[kugelfischli]

how does it work..? i never started one, i always just joined *laughs*

[just_keep_on]

Don't you just ... make one? I think it's the whole "getting people to join" and "keeping it alive" that's the hard part, right?

[skye_fall]

Oooooooooh my god.... *snicker*

Osa. Bikini. ....*head explodes* *melts into a puddle of goo*

You killed me. I will have only one thing going through my mind for the rest of the night. XD

And I'm all for an OSASA community. ^_^

[just_keep_on]

^____^ It's hilarious 'cause it's only mentioned *once* in the whole chapter. That's the power of Osa. In a bikini.

That can be a commercial now~

[skye_fall]

But once is enough to bring about very good baaaaad thoughts. *nosebleed* ^_^;

Such power she holds over us XD