chapter 9

Apr 20, 2010 17:14

Title: Fucking done with this shit
Author: sk_swing
Pairing: Jongkey, 2min
Genre: No fucking clue
Rating: PG-13
A/N: This is the real ending. It doesn't match the tone of how it started, which bugs the hell out of me, but I can't exactly make it rainbows or snarky because that just makes no sense. And I've always been bad at ending things.

fucking kid probably liked sucking on glue sticks (and cock) in his spare time )

fic, jongkey, 2min

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chaoticnuances April 21 2010, 08:51:48 UTC
I love this! It's not the same style as the other chapters,but a cute-ish ending. It's cool how the two of them change, but at the same time, they don't. I'm contradicting myself, but whatever.

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sk_swing April 21 2010, 12:54:36 UTC
Thank you for commenting! I actually changed this after I read your comment (hopefully I didn't get rid of everything you liked) and I'm probably going to be tweaking it constantly throughout the day. I just really dislike when you lose a particular voice at the end.

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salted_taiyaki April 21 2010, 19:26:55 UTC
i loved this. lots. especially the part with minho and kibum, i just found that to be very funny after reading it for the second/third time.
just sayin'.

also,
Because if Jonghyun was gone it would mean that they wouldn't need to have the talk and if Jonghyun was gone it meant that they could avoid this (awkward silence time the sequel).
favorite line ♥

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sk_swing April 21 2010, 21:29:52 UTC
Thank you for commenting~ and reading to the end :D

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sk_swing April 21 2010, 21:33:00 UTC
No, no, Taemin is innocent! He's young, he's still in high school, and he thinks that something like this will give him closure. But anyone who's been through this knows that there really is no closure, and knowing more just haunts you later on.

I'm really glad you think they stayed true to character (and that I stayed consistent in style and voice), I struggled with keeping them that way. Thanks for reading the whole thing~

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nuile April 21 2010, 22:00:36 UTC
I swallowed the whole story in one go and... I have no words.
My mind refuses to function.
I had problems breathing while reading.
It is so intense I felt like crawling out of my skin to ease the tension *_*
It's just so...
I LOVE that writing style. Sorta dry, sorta measured, sorta careless... It produces so many emotions! And emotions is the only thing I treasure in the world ^///^

Oh, really, THANK YOU for writing this.

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sk_swing April 21 2010, 22:21:54 UTC
Wow, wow I'm so flattered that my story had such an effect on you. And I love that description of the style 'sort of careless' because that really was the kind of attitude I wanted to get across :) Thank you so much for commenting!

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bopeep_achu April 21 2010, 22:49:40 UTC
the ending's cute :D
no srsly XD
thanks yo <33

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sk_swing April 21 2010, 23:39:28 UTC
^^ Thank you for commenting!

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