chapter 9

Apr 20, 2010 17:14

Title: Fucking done with this shit
Author: sk_swing
Pairing: Jongkey, 2min
Genre: No fucking clue
Rating: PG-13
A/N: This is the real ending. It doesn't match the tone of how it started, which bugs the hell out of me, but I can't exactly make it rainbows or snarky because that just makes no sense. And I've always been bad at ending things.

fucking kid probably liked sucking on glue sticks (and cock) in his spare time )

fic, jongkey, 2min

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mnol_heart April 22 2010, 01:28:46 UTC
this ending isn't shit, but i understand about hating to write endings. it's just... hard lol

"It won't, it'll just give him a better visual." my favorite line. very key and very true haha

loved this story the whole way through. well written and verrrry well stylized. captures college dude attitude very well and the characters themselves as well. good job, you. good job. :D

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mnol_heart April 22 2010, 01:29:44 UTC
oh also, i've been loving your gorgeous key header the whole time. god, i love his face. and everything about him.

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sk_swing April 22 2010, 01:36:58 UTC
Thank you for reading till the end! Key is too fucking pretty but do you noticed the black gloved hand in the background? Like wtf is that he is totally going to put chloroform over Key's face.

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mnol_heart April 22 2010, 04:53:52 UTC
i did notice that creeper hand actually... i was... concerned lol

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sodonii_chan April 22 2010, 02:53:27 UTC
I loved this. :D Especially: and if Jonghyun was gone it meant that they could avoid this (awkward silence time the sequel).

And the last line "Yeah okay whatever, so I won't." Idk, I just really loved that line. I really love the way this whole story was written. ^^

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sk_swing April 22 2010, 03:57:39 UTC
Thank you so much for commenting and for reading till the end! <3

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soasian101 April 22 2010, 02:54:53 UTC
god wtf. It's over...(;_;?!?!)

Your Key is my favorite Key btw. In all of fanfiction. And you know, I love jongkey like efffff. This just fuels it like hell. And the ending wasn't as bad as you thought it was I think. It's very Jongkey and I can't really imagine a better ending.

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sk_swing April 22 2010, 03:58:22 UTC
Ah thank you so much! This entire thing was written without much thought and I'm so happy that people are enjoying it.

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panda_ayu April 22 2010, 03:10:43 UTC
so i read every chapter of this in an hour (with a lunch break of course)and i think it might be an understatement to say that it was fucking brilliant! :)
i am so attracted to this style of writing (pity i have no talent in it) and the ending fit really nicely. it didn't follow the exact style of the other chapters, a little less careless but the ending was really good, fascinating how key changes enough to not want to fuck around with jonghyun anymore... there was a bizzare sweetness to that.. weird.. i liked it ^^
also all the swearing lol is exactly like hanging around my guy friends! there is constant talk of dick for some reason!... strange boys..
but yeah i loved it and i'll be sticking round if you post any other stuff any time soon XD

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sk_swing April 22 2010, 03:59:09 UTC
YES! Boys are so retarded when they get to gather. There's way too much fronting and swaggering for me to handle sometimes. Thank you for the comments~

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shinee_xoxo April 22 2010, 04:47:18 UTC
do i even have to tell you that this is amazing? (sorry for being too lazy not to comment on all the parts...) seriously, so freaking funny yet serious and just intense

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sk_swing April 22 2010, 05:09:14 UTC
I am thankful for any comments~! I'm really glad you liked it.

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