HMD: Constructive & Positive Feedback!

[thepull_mods]

HMD: Con-crit & Po-crit!

This post is for providing Constructive AND Positive feedback for fellow players regarding how they play their characters in Siren's Pull.

Constructive criticism should be just that - please avoid bashing or being rude. If you have critique for a characterization, please support it as much as possible and offer as much

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[walkthedawn]

Player Name: Kal

Character Name: Riku
Character Journal: walkthedawn
Character Canon Source: Kingdom Hearts

Character Name: Re-l Mayer
Character Journal: proxysearch
Character Canon Source: Ergo Proxy

Character Name: Alice Liddell
Character Journal: cruelwonder
Character Canon Source: American McGee's Alice

All of them have their own HMDs if you prefer to use them instead.

[longaevus]

I don't know any of your canons but it's such a treat to tag you as you seem to be so careful and thoughtful over your tags and as for yourself, you're such a sweet and caring person. So glad that I know you ♥

[walkthedawn]

Thank you, dearie! That means a lot to me ;; ♥♥♥♥

[kingofrooks]

I still need CR with Riku.

sdgsdfg okay Re-l. I don't stalk her enough as I should, but I honestly think you've created a very real person here. The problem with a lot of characters from dystopian fiction as well as from animes is how much they are formed from an ideal. They are plot devices made flesh and given a voice. I don't know EP, but your Re-l isn't that at all. She's incredibly real, with her relationships especially, and I love how well you balance the different kinds of relationships she has.

Let's just take Edgeworth, Raul and Dae. Not even Bruce, because you know I gush over that enough in AIM. With Edgeworth, it's a more... careful approach. She doesn't know him, his thinking is alien to her- and she tries, with him. It's a good relationship progression, with how careful they are, and how unwilling they are to take anything for granted- and the way they approach the relationship honestly highlights how different they are. Contrast this with Raul and Dae. She knows them, she knows how they work, she knows what they want

[littlest_lord]

Player Name: Ciara

Character Name: Ciel Phantomhive
Character Journal: littlest_lord
Character Canon Source: Kuroshitsuji

Character Name: Haruhi Fujioka
Character Journal: modestmusume
Character Canon Source: Ouran High School Host Club

Character Name: Beatrice
Character Journal: beatrolliche
Character Canon Source: Umineko no naku koro ni

Character Name: Nana
Character Journal: subject_seven
Character Canon Source: Elfen Lied

Character Name: Kyubey
Character Journal: inkyubeytor
Character Canon Source: Puella Magi Madoka Magica

I apologize for being a bit slow lately ;A; I've had a lot of distractions and things going on ;;. They seem to be disappearing though so, expect a flooding of backtags.

[walkthedawn]

Besides activity, I think you have strong voices for all of your kids and it's great to see. Nana, Kyubey, and Ciel are very clear and very involved what goes on in the city. I would say that Nana could get out a little more and I think Kyubey could bother a few more people, but that's just me.

On the flipside, I don't see Haruhi or Beato all that much, especially the former. When I DO see them, they're also very well played. I've really liked seeing Beato laughing it up with some of the Baccano characters and a few others, so that's a delight to see.

All in all, keep it up. I love seeing you around and I love seeing what your characters have to say.

[littlest_lord]

Thank you so much, dude! I'm gonna try and get Nana to get herself a bit messy and...I am totally planning on creeping on more people with Kyubey I'm just...|D still trying to finish all the tags I got from that wish log LMAO ;A; flksdjf BUT THEY WILL BE CREEPED I swear.

I'm gonna keep working on that, especially with Haruhi! I've been trying to force her to go out more, like she did on her date with Kegio, and with the upcoming school term coming, I want her to attend and maybe get a new job. I just...need to see what Cee is planning on doing with Tamaki since he's very meddling when it comes to precious daughter. Same with Beato! I actually have an idea for her to be nosy, but I need to see if it's alright to do or not.

Thank you, though ;~; I will keep trying my best!

[rapturescreed]

You have very strong voices for all your characters, and that's great. I'd love to see more time given to Beato and Haruhi, especially, but from what I've seen of them, I really do like, and they're very well played

[quackery]

Player Name: Maddie
Character Name: Ahiru
Character Journal: quackery
Character Canon Source: Princess Tutu

[axemeaquestion]

AHIRU IS SO CUTE. Like I was saying before, I haven't seen Princess Tutu in forever but when I found out we were having an Ahiru? I was like WHOAH AWESOME HOLY SHIT. I love how you play her! I can't say much critically because again, I haven't seen the anime in forever, but from what I can tell you do excellent with her! You like, re-remind me of what Ahiru was like and stuff. And you're really fun to tag and you're so sweet. JUST WANTED TO TELL YOU.

/helpful information

[quackery]

I legit giggled like a tiny little kid at this okay

YOU'RE SWEET TOO and your information is the most helpful, okay c:

[axemeaquestion]

NO YOU ARE also COOL I AM GLAD.

[gaveherwings]

Player Name: Kelly

Character Name: Replica Riku ("Joe Fieldman")
Character Journal: madeinoblivion
Character Canon Source: Kingdom Hearts: Chain of Memories

Character Name: Daedalus Yumeno
Character Journal: gaveherwings
Character Canon Source: Ergo Proxy

[longaevus]

I love tagging Daedalus as he seems to get on with Helen and he's such a nice guy :) More doctor tags always, cause your tags are just awesome and always give me something.

[gaveherwings]

^-^ I wouldn't necessarily describe Daedalus as a "nice guy", but that's certainly the side he presents publicly and professionally. I've totally adored interactions with the fellow docs, though, and he'll be keeping a cautious eye on Magnus, and mind her back to make sure no one's planning to interfere with how willing she is to delve into the local mysteries.

He's taking a backseat in his research life, and focusing on clinical, but that's a far throw from his canonical work, and to be honest he sort of missing the deeper areas of study. But if he can keep avenues open for her to do it? All the better for everybody.

[longaevus]

Well he seems rather nice to me, and he's polite. Helen likes polite. And aww, Dae ♥ She appreciates that (silently).

She'll definitely discuss the research with him if he likes, it'd be nice for her to get opinions and help build stronger theories with those of similar minds/knowledge/areas.

[showbizpanache]

Player Name: Candice

Character Name: Kurt Hummel
Character Journal: showbizpanache
Character Canon Source: Glee

[longaevus]

Oh. My God. LITERALLY, CANDICE. Your Kurt is absolutely perfect and I wish I had things to tag him with because I want your Kurt tags, but I will (for now) settle for reading him. You are so in character and you just have... him. His little trolliness and how his moods quickly change (like your last post where he was troll blah blah and then OH HI GUYS). And his style and... he's just fantastic

As for you, you're such a sweet and caring person whom I love talking to and need to talk to more ♥

[showbizpanache]

Thank you, thank you and thank you. C: I don't think I'm anywhere near perfect yet, but comments like this really encourage me to keep trying!

[hisdiscretion]

I love the depth and thought you put into Kurt as always. I think you did a good job handling the recent drama in his life without making it seem too melodramatic, but still believable. Keep up the gay good work.