HMD: Constructive & Positive Feedback!

[thepull_mods]

HMD: Con-crit & Po-crit!

This post is for providing Constructive AND Positive feedback for fellow players regarding how they play their characters in Siren's Pull.

Constructive criticism should be just that - please avoid bashing or being rude. If you have critique for a characterization, please support it as much as possible and offer as much

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[littlest_lord]

Player Name: Ciara

Character Name: Ciel Phantomhive
Character Journal: littlest_lord
Character Canon Source: Kuroshitsuji

Character Name: Haruhi Fujioka
Character Journal: modestmusume
Character Canon Source: Ouran High School Host Club

Character Name: Beatrice
Character Journal: beatrolliche
Character Canon Source: Umineko no naku koro ni

Character Name: Nana
Character Journal: subject_seven
Character Canon Source: Elfen Lied

Character Name: Kyubey
Character Journal: inkyubeytor
Character Canon Source: Puella Magi Madoka Magica

I apologize for being a bit slow lately ;A; I've had a lot of distractions and things going on ;;. They seem to be disappearing though so, expect a flooding of backtags.

[walkthedawn]

Besides activity, I think you have strong voices for all of your kids and it's great to see. Nana, Kyubey, and Ciel are very clear and very involved what goes on in the city. I would say that Nana could get out a little more and I think Kyubey could bother a few more people, but that's just me.

On the flipside, I don't see Haruhi or Beato all that much, especially the former. When I DO see them, they're also very well played. I've really liked seeing Beato laughing it up with some of the Baccano characters and a few others, so that's a delight to see.

All in all, keep it up. I love seeing you around and I love seeing what your characters have to say.

[littlest_lord]

Thank you so much, dude! I'm gonna try and get Nana to get herself a bit messy and...I am totally planning on creeping on more people with Kyubey I'm just...|D still trying to finish all the tags I got from that wish log LMAO ;A; flksdjf BUT THEY WILL BE CREEPED I swear.

I'm gonna keep working on that, especially with Haruhi! I've been trying to force her to go out more, like she did on her date with Kegio, and with the upcoming school term coming, I want her to attend and maybe get a new job. I just...need to see what Cee is planning on doing with Tamaki since he's very meddling when it comes to precious daughter. Same with Beato! I actually have an idea for her to be nosy, but I need to see if it's alright to do or not.

Thank you, though ;~; I will keep trying my best!

[rapturescreed]

You have very strong voices for all your characters, and that's great. I'd love to see more time given to Beato and Haruhi, especially, but from what I've seen of them, I really do like, and they're very well played

[subject_seven]

Uuu ;~; thank you Amy! I'm glad they sound strong, I do try my best! And I've been trying to focus more attention on those two...just this week or so kind of wasn't the greatest 8D; where is my drive etc BUT IT IS BACK AND I AM GONNA get at it yearrrrrr.

fdsljk Ahhhhhhhhhhhh ;A; that makes me so, so happy. I always worry about her, even if I derp like crazy when playing her. Raul - no turning Nana into Rapunzel :C OKAY? fdsf and ahhhh I'm glad you liked that moment! I had SO much fun writing that.

Ohhhhh she should, she should. I have a zillion and one ideas of how to get her messy so...|D heh. THIS CAN BE ARRANGED and hnnn want family times ;A; wannnnnnt.

;_; Thank you though, Amy, really. I will do my best!

[rapturescreed]

Yeah! <3

Derping like crazy is good, though. She is a bit of a derp. And noooo, he won't do that >.> Or close enough to that. Family times will be had!

[gaveherwings]

wwafhjjkaeg but seriously, Ciel & Elizabeth's interactions have been gratuitous ear to ear grinny things to read. Nana is always a pile of preciousness, and I love to watch her explore the world and ask kid-questions.

I love watching Kyubey continue to creeper, love to see where Gabriel's crusade against his Soul grift is headed, and it's pretty awesome that you manage to keep him both adorable and slightly horrifying.

I'd still like to see more of Haruhi and Beatrice- I'd especially like to more of the latter meddling- I think my suggestion would be to latch her to a good foil like Sherlock, so she could break his logical deductions with her witchcraft a bit more. Drive him nuts. it's been awhile since we've seen Beatrice drive anyone nuts, which is partially lack-of-Battler-syndrome, but don't leave her hanging! I've seen her moving in on the Baccano cast, which is exciting!

[littlest_lord]

fdljkfasd aaaaaaaaaaaa I'm so glad you enjoyed reading their interactions-! I had just as much fun writing them, even if they were painful, and I'm glad you like Nana and her herp derp ways ;u;

fdsljf Kyubey is just...the creepiest mofo ever, so I'm glad you find him adorable and creepy ;_; I try so hard for that balance.

alksjaflj gyah yes. I need to put them out more. I'm really trying, honest! And these past two weeks...haven't been the best for one reason or another. BUT THAT IS A REALLY GOOD SUGGESTION! And yes...;;; It's hard because without Battler around, I'm trying really hard to stop her from mellowing out, and when Bern was in the game...all she wanted to do was, uh, keep a low profile 8D;

BUT I have ideas, actually! Some I wanna actually run by you so, keep a look out =3=

Also I demand more stickers ;n;

[gaveherwings]

[subject_seven]

/STICKS ON FOREHEAD YEARRRRRR

[quackery]

First off I want to say thank you for being so cool with Ahiru being a derp over almost half of your characters LMFAO thank you for putting up with meeee man ;__; That being said, I always love playing with Ciel and Kyubey aaaaa. Kyubey in particular is beautiful and true to canon! And stalking Nana will always give me diabetes in the best way. ALSO THEIR VOICES ARE ALL SO DIFFERENT but you still handle them all so well and ily in general, okay.

[littlest_lord]

I LOVE YOUR DERP NEVER STOP DERPING ilu ;A; Thank you so, so much dudeeeeee.

I demand more bondings and contracts, okay? *^*

[quackery]

oh fuck that icon my heart AND YOU'RE WELCOME, AND I WON'T

All the bonding and all the contracts X( come at me bro, my body is ready, etc etc

[pullsheavendown]

I always forget that it's you playing all these characters, which speaks well of your ability to understand and voice them all. I don't...really have ereal CR with them, which is a bummer and something I should strive for, but I do enjoy seeing what they're up to, especially Ciel and Kyubey, who is just AUGH. You know. In a good way.

[littlest_lord]

You know what? WE SHOULD GET REAL CR ;~; Ahhhhhhhh but thank you really! I'm glad they all seem true to who they are! ;u; Since I try my best to strive for that.

And I'm really glad that you like Ciel and Kyubey! ;A; and LMAO yeah Kyubey is uh...special. I CAN TOTALLY CREEP ON ROXAS WITH HIM IF YOU EVER WANT...

[athermercy]

I love your Kyubey. He's such a hilarious troll and successful salesman (haters gonna hate). His log with Gabriel had me laughing.

Nana is as heartbreaking adorable as I remember her to be. ;; ♥