HMD: Constructive & Positive Feedback!

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HMD: Con-crit & Po-crit!

This post is for providing Constructive AND Positive feedback for fellow players regarding how they play their characters in Siren's Pull.

Constructive criticism should be just that - please avoid bashing or being rude. If you have critique for a characterization, please support it as much as possible and offer as much

Comments

[kingofrooks]

I still need CR with Riku.

sdgsdfg okay Re-l. I don't stalk her enough as I should, but I honestly think you've created a very real person here. The problem with a lot of characters from dystopian fiction as well as from animes is how much they are formed from an ideal. They are plot devices made flesh and given a voice. I don't know EP, but your Re-l isn't that at all. She's incredibly real, with her relationships especially, and I love how well you balance the different kinds of relationships she has.

Let's just take Edgeworth, Raul and Dae. Not even Bruce, because you know I gush over that enough in AIM. With Edgeworth, it's a more... careful approach. She doesn't know him, his thinking is alien to her- and she tries, with him. It's a good relationship progression, with how careful they are, and how unwilling they are to take anything for granted- and the way they approach the relationship honestly highlights how different they are. Contrast this with Raul and Dae. She knows them, she knows how they work, she knows what they want. And she has them wrapped around her little finger.

sdfgdh I love how you throw her into different situations, which showcases different parts of her, and it fully fleshes her out beyond an ideal, beyond even a character to a person.

Also Alice! I need to see more of Alice and get to know more about her- but right now, she's... interesting. She's strange, a little contradictory; a stranger girl in a strange world. What I find most remarkable about her is how much you make her shine through her voice, both spoken and narrative. She's intriguing, and I want to see more.

PLUS You're awesome with plotting and usually one of the people I'm okay with talking to even at my most reclusive. ilu. /biased

[walkthedawn]

okay, wow, legit tearing up a little okay

Thank you for all of your kind words and I'm glad that you can see the little things...though I think you're gushing and loving on all the things that I didn't realize I did too much??? But thank you anyway, because I definitely play her differently in relationships, regardless of whether they're friendly, familial, or romantic. And it's been a real challenge to shove her into potentially stronger waters this month.

I'm still getting a feel on Alice so I'm glad she's interesting enough to continue reading!

ilu too, and thank you bb ;;

[kingofrooks]

I NOTICE EVERYTHING EVEN WHAT YOU DON'T NOTICE. It's kind of... my job... and I can't turn that part of the brain off so welp you get literature analysis of your RP I guess. 8D

And I will be bugging Alice, no excuses. No escape too.

/chuuuuus ♥ NO SOBBING this is all for loveeeeeeeeeeeeeee~

[walkthedawn]

YES WONDERFUL that should be a college course, actually. Roleplay analysis: Literature and Psychology.

♥ /chuus