your body is my body and we breathe between the lines

[singingintime]

Title: your body is my body and we breathe between the lines
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: ~1600
Pairing: Kirk/Spock
Summary: AU set in the same universe as Symphony for Stars and Planets, based on the prompt "Jim playing at a jazzy bar or something, being all sexy, and Spock being jealous when other people check him out."
Notes: This was SUPPOSED to be

Comments

[alaceron]

Holy asdfghjkl;. Seriously, keyboardmashingly good.

[singingintime]

:D :D So very glad you enjoyed! Thank you for taking the time to comment!

[fizzerbass]

*note to self: Always sit on nearest object when reading anything by singingintime otherwise buttocks will meet floor in a nanosecond.*

In other words, you knock me on my ass. Who ever knew trumpet playing could be so sexy? I mean, I was a band geek growing up and still never came across something this wholely hot and eminently satisfying. It's not so much what Jim is playing, but rather, how he is playing it. Totally immersed, totally subsumed, totally giving of his whole self to his audience because he simply can't not play...and yet you just know part of the reason he is so free with his talent is because he has Spock grounding him and loving him and letting him be himself. I know this piece was so Spock-centric, but the way you wrote Spock's - and everyone else's - focus on Jim, it's like Jim was every other word in every sentence.

I loved Spock's turmoil in this. Not that I want to see him tortured and full of anguish, just that you've made him so very vulnerable and, even better, aware of his vulnerability...which in

[vampirehottie91]

Iloveyou
you put my random half ass sleep deprived thoughts into words xD

[fizzerbass]

No problem. *g* It's easy when the story is this good to begin with, yeah?

Hope you get some sleep soon!

[singingintime]

Ahhh, I never know how to reply to your comments! *hands* You are far, FAR too nice and complimentary! ♥♥♥ Just--oh my gosh, thank you so, SO much, I am simply blown away and truly, truly pleased at the level of enjoyment you got from it, and from my other stuff. *blush* So happy to have provided

[maggie2mw]

Beautiful! I absolutely LOVED how you described Spock's inner thoughts!

[singingintime]

Thank you so, so much! I'm so very delighted you enjoyed it. :D

[singingintime]

*blush* What a lovely thing to say--thank you so, so much! I'm just so absolutely delighted you enjoyed it, and all warm and pleased from reading this lovely comment. And I had a hard time with that line, so I'm glad it worked for you! <3

[singingintime]

:D Thank you so, so much! I'm so very pleased you felt it was properly descriptive, and that you enjoyed it! Hope you got your air~! :D