your body is my body and we breathe between the lines

[singingintime]

Title: your body is my body and we breathe between the lines
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: ~1600
Pairing: Kirk/Spock
Summary: AU set in the same universe as Symphony for Stars and Planets, based on the prompt "Jim playing at a jazzy bar or something, being all sexy, and Spock being jealous when other people check him out."
Notes: This was SUPPOSED to be

Comments

[roseandheather]

Nnnnnngh.

As your fic always does, this just absolutely slayed me. Jesusfuck. I have such a thing for people getting turned on by talent, and this here basically took that and put it on paper. Well done. Well done, indeed.

So tell me, when are we getting a sequel to No-Win Scenario?

[singingintime]

Thank you so, so much! What absolutely lovely things to say. :D I'm really delighted you enjoyed it, and that that talent-thing came across. Talent is definitely hot. *grin*

Man, I would REALLY LOVE to say this weekend, but honestly, the follow-ups for that are giving me SO MUCH TROUBLE that I don't want to make that promise when I can't keep it. And I don't want to rush them and not do 'em justice, you know? *sighs mournfully* What I CAN tell you is that I'm definitely dedicating a shitload of time to 'em this weekend, 'cause my life will finally have stopped being so insane and I will have the time. So, um. That's kind of a long way of saying "ASAP," D: sorry. It's at the top of my list. /o\

[singingintime]

I'm so, so pleased you enjoyed it! YAY, everybody agrees with me that talent is the best thing everrr. \o/ Score one for musicians and other equally talented people. :D

[alasse]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH, THIS WAS AMAAAAAAAAAZING. Seriously, it was just - it was sensual and vivid and utterly, utterly wonderful. I loved how Spock felt jealousy, that it wasn't about him owning Jim, but rather Jim owning some part of him... I loved your descriptions of everything, the place, the people, the music, JIM. And that ending, oh my god. GORGEOUS.

Thank you SO much ♥

[singingintime]

Oh, I'm so delighted to hear that you liked it! Especially that you liked the way he felt jealousy--that was the really challenging part of it to me, because normal jealousy seemed not to fit with Symphony!Spock! And what lovely, loovely things to say, sensual and vivid and gah! *blush* Thank you so much. You are sooo welcome! ♥

[charlietinpants]

oh. my. GOOOOD. i lack the words to express how PERFECT this is. -fans self- very well done =DDD

[singingintime]

Thank you so much! What a sweet thing to saaay. :D I'm so so pleased to hear you enjoyed it!

[masterpenguin82]

An awesome follow up to Symphony for Stars and Planets. I really hope you write more in this 'verse, particularly if they're goning to be like this one! Absolutely amazing, I loved it.

[singingintime]

Thank you so much! I'm so, so delighted you enjoyed it! :D And I have a proper sequel planned out for it, at some distant point in the future, hehe.

[jesse_kips]

God, that was amazing! I couild feel the heat pressing down on me, and the rough press of Spock's emotions felt very real - it was a nice twist, having him being jealous not because he owns Jim, but because he himself is owned.

Such a fabulous continuation <3

[singingintime]

:D Thank you sooo, so much! I'm so very pleased you enjoyed it, especially the sensory bits! Your comment is so eloquent XDD. And it didn't seem true to Symphony!Spock to have him be normally jealous, y'know, so I had to twist it a bit--so glad you feel it worked!

<3