No Other Choice, Chapter 3/6

Aug 27, 2008 14:03


Title:  No Other Choice
Author:  SimplyShanni
Beta:  None. All mistakes are mine and mine alone.
Disclaimer:  This is a work of pure fiction. It has been written solely for fun, not for profit. No disrespect is meant to the actual individuals represented here and I make no claims about their sexual orientation in real life.
Pairing:  Orlibean
Genre:  ( Read more... )

author: simplyshanni, fic: no other choice

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simplyshanni December 9 2008, 19:09:30 UTC
Hi, hon! It's good to BE back. I missed everyone here so much, but RL's settled down now and things are pretty much back to normal, thank heavens!

I'm so pleased you enjoyed this chapter, and don't worry about not commenting before. I'm just thrilled to know that I have another reader out there!

*love-&-hugs*

Shanni

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ireth06 December 9 2008, 19:56:32 UTC
This is so wonderful sweetie!

Poor Sean! Finally worked up the courage to talk about things ... kisses the Elf and the Elf goes into instant shock! *giggles*

Things better turn out right in the next chapter ...*glares with a giggle*

Love it hun!
thanks for sharing hugs and kisses!

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simplyshanni December 9 2008, 20:09:35 UTC
Oh, thank you for such lovely feedback! I appreciate it more than words can say!

Yeah, poor Seanie! He's not sure WHAT'S going to happen next! And Orlando really doesn't know WHAT hit him! It was definitely the last thing HE expected!

I guess you'll just have to wait till next Tuesday to find out, hon! *cackles evolly* Uhh, did that work? I've been taking lessons from Liriel on evol cackling and this was my first attempt at it. LOL!

Take care hon, and thanks again for the wonderful comment!

*hugs and kisses coming your way*

Shanni

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ireth06 December 9 2008, 20:58:20 UTC
Liriel is totally corrupting LJ!
LOL!

Your cackles are just great hun! *giggles*
*hugs*
Mar

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simplyshanni December 9 2008, 21:08:38 UTC
Isn't she a wonderful influence? *giggles* You seriously just have to love that woman!

Thanks, that's good to know! I think I still need to work on it a bit, though. I have a LONG way to go before I have even a fraction of Lir's panache!

*huggles*

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celticdelove December 9 2008, 20:20:26 UTC
*is beaming* Yay! these two are just perfection in its sweetest form! You have such a way of describing their emotions and putting your reader in the moment. :)

*pokes Orli* Now tell him you love him and let him ravish you!

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simplyshanni December 9 2008, 20:31:42 UTC
Thank you so much! That has got to be one of the nicest compliments I've ever receieved! I can't tell you how much it means to me. I've only been writing fic for a bit less than a year now so I'm still pretty new at this and comments like your are so inspirational! They just make me want to keep writing!

Orli's a bit out of it at the moment and I'm not sure he even felt your poke! *giggle* More will be posted next Tuesday!

*hugs*

Shanni

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jackieville December 9 2008, 20:21:37 UTC
You...you...stopped....AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!

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simplyshanni December 9 2008, 20:37:42 UTC
Sorry hon! This was my first attempt at an evol cliffhanger. *grins* I've been taking lessons from Liriel and I wasn't sure how successful I'd be at it. I take it from your comment that it worked?

Don't worry too much, though. Final chapter will be up next Tuesday, muses willing that is!

*hugs*

Shanni

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jackieville December 9 2008, 20:41:20 UTC
The lesson was learned well *giggles*

I will find a way to get you back *winks*

*hugs tightly*

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simplyshanni December 9 2008, 20:53:34 UTC
Good to know! *g*

Oooh, I can hardly wait! ;D

Oh, and I just finished friending you!

*hugs back*

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simplyshanni December 10 2008, 07:16:04 UTC
Hi Caro! Thank you so much for taking the time to leave feedback! I always look forward to knowing what you think of my work! I don't blame you for wanting to give the boys a cuddle. These two are damn near irresistable at the best of times, but when they're this vulnerable, it takes it to a whole other level! *pets the pretties*

I'm pleased that you liked my description of their hug. It's rather a crucial moment in their relationship and I wanted to get their emotions just right. Your comment lets me know that I'm on the right track! The final chapter will be posted next Tuesday, muses willing, so you don't have too long to wait! ;D

*hugs*

Shanni

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