They Say Breathing Helps (2/2)

[silentpoetry1]

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[goldie3]

That was gorgeous and beautiful. I loved the way you described the Trainspot. Being a fan of dilapidated spots(yeah, I am totes crazy) that have something really special, I could understand.

And I loved this line
Because if life were just a stage dance, then man, that smile stole the show.

If someone asks me to describe Jensen, it's his smile that first comes to mind. And for me, Jensen's smile steals the show:-)

I think, I something this story;)

[silentpoetry1]

Oh, I am totally a fan of dilapidated spots, too. ♥ Thank you so much for your comment!

I think I something you! :)

[woman_of_]

So full of hope for the future. A wonderfully inspiring story.

[silentpoetry1]

Thank you very, very much! <33

[xingti]

Wow! That was really great story, very touchingly!

[silentpoetry1]

Eep! Thank you! :DD

[dreamlitnight]

More? I hope it's not the end... That was lovely and had such an honest quality to it. The way how they handled the scary "what if?" of this situation, just seemed... right. Thank you for sharing this with us.

[silentpoetry1]

Hmm, I don't have any more planned, but I won't rule it out. :)

Thank you so much for your comment! <333

[lycaness]

Aw, I loved this. Jared was such a sweetheart. Poor Jensen, having to go through that all alone. I can't believe his family would do that, what aweful people. *growls*
I loved the banter, it was so much fun to read and really lightened the atmosphere while not taking away the intensity of the situation.
Really well written, I really enjoyed it. I'm going to assume that Jensen's body accepted his transplan without trouble and he lived a long, happy, healthy life with Jared. :)
*hugs*

[silentpoetry1]

Yeah, they weren't great people, were they?

Thank you so much! :) I'm glad you like their banter. And that is a lovely ending to envisage! :D

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