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silentpoetry1

They Say Breathing Helps (2/2)

Mar 16, 2010 16:57

( Part two )

jared, j2, jared/jensen, jensen, fandom: spn

Comments 72

eilan March 16 2010, 14:35:46 UTC

Absolutely gorgeous.

silentpoetry1 March 21 2010, 05:17:14 UTC

Thank you. <3

heather03nmg March 16 2010, 14:38:28 UTC

Oh my goodness! I have such huge love for you and this story. It was everything I hoped for and more. So soft and sweet and lovely. And Jared's comedy and commentary was just so adorable.
You just really outdid yourself and I can't thank you enough for taking the time to write this. You are awesomesauce!
We need an epilogue though. Boys moving in together and some tlc and sex.

zubeneschamali March 16 2010, 17:17:08 UTC

We need an epilogue though. Boys moving in together and some tlc and sex.

I second that motion. :)

silentpoetry1 March 21 2010, 05:19:05 UTC

Peer pressure! ;) I shall see about an epilogue, have some other stuff to work on, though. <3

silentpoetry1 March 21 2010, 05:18:16 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm thrilled that you liked it!!! :D As for an epilogue-- we shall see. Hee! <333

aidanirl March 16 2010, 15:48:35 UTC

I was little aprehensive about reading it, but since I saw no "death!fic" warnings I decided to give it a go, and WOMAN!That was so beautiful, romantic and yeah, kinda sick at the same time, but gosh, I enjoyed every word!!!

Exellent work! Thank you!

silentpoetry1 March 21 2010, 05:20:20 UTC

Hee, it was made very clear to me that I was not allowed to write a death!fic. :P Thank you so much for your lovely comment!

<33

velvetsun March 16 2010, 17:10:48 UTC

This was such a beautiful story! I loved it. Thanks for sharing! =)

silentpoetry1 March 21 2010, 05:20:44 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it!! <3333

rocketbalm March 16 2010, 17:17:32 UTC

this was so beautifully done. I loved it.

silentpoetry1 March 21 2010, 05:21:00 UTC

Yay! Thank you! :DD