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Fic: (NaNo) The Citadel - chapter 4

Nov 18, 2007 18:02

title: The Citadel - chapter 4
rating: NC-17, PG-13 for this part
summary: Sci-Fi AU: Several decades in the future, Dominic, Billy, and the rest of the guys work and live on an orbiting space station, which gets infected and taken over by an alien force. The boys have to fight the evil stuff and save the day. :)

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fanfic, au, series: the citadel, nano 07, lotrips

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random_yayness November 19 2007, 02:21:35 UTC

... DUDE. This chapter was AWESOME. You could almost HEAR the "duh duh DUH" music. *giggles* But really, WOW. This was SO GREAT. Andy was wonderful, and OMG VIGGO. HE WAS BEYOND PERFECT!

Here commences the Your!Viggo fangirling.

“Probably. But only if he has a good reason to doubt it’s from Earth. Viggo’s a big believer in aliens, and it annoys him to no end that astronauts haven’t found fossils on Mars.”

ROFL!! That is so great. I AM ALSO ANNOYED. but not as much as Viggo.

Only a moment later, a man appeared, dragging a small cart filled with rakes, shovels, and saws behind him. He was barefoot, and he had a cloth knapsack slung over one shoulder. His trousers had holes in the knees and were grass-stained at the cuffs, and his thin button-down shirt was unbuttoned to the middle of his chest.

Jen, that's like, the perfectest intro/description for Viggo EVER. BAREFOOT, THANK YOU. HEEE.

Viggo stopped and plucked a handful of berries off an overhanging tree and handed them to Dominic. “You look hungry,” he explained. ( ... )

silentdescant November 19 2007, 02:29:40 UTC

♥!!!

LOL I KNEW YOU'D LOVE VIGGO. I love Viggo too. He's the awesome-est. I could picture him sooo clearly appearing like that out from behind a large bush, dragging all those gardening tools with him... Oh, Viggo. ♥ I'm also annoyed about the lack of fossils! You'd think we'd have found something by now... >.<

I'm tempted to slash Viggo and Dom in this, but I will refrain. :X LOL They can stick with the mutual respect and friendship. Viggo and Dom are like, thisclose to being in love, and probably would be if not for Billy. LOL Unlike Dom with Elijah... there's only friendship there. I just can't bring myself to slash them... LOL

and omg, starting with, like, the first few paragraphs of the next chapter, things start to happen really fast. I wish I could post, like, NOW but it's not finished being written yet! LOL

random_yayness November 19 2007, 02:34:11 UTC

He IS the awesome-est! And like I said, it was the BEST intro/description, of like, anything. This is like, your magnum opus (so far). LOL

Yeah, I could see the affection, but not slashy in THIS fic. though you should so write that someday And Dom & Lij, no. No slashing. THANK YOU. LOL

WOO. That's like the formula for the best books and movies. Start kinda slow to get the readers used to it and used to the characters and setup, and then BOOM OMG SHIT HAPPENS.

ranDOMly, have you watched Ross Noble yet? LOL

silentdescant November 19 2007, 03:29:11 UTC

LOL Well, I'm glad you like it. :D

HEE, I should write a little AU-of-the-AU ficlet of that. Dom/Viggo <3. :P

LOL yeah, the next bit is very OMG/WTF/OH SHIT. :P

NO, I have not. >.< I wish I had enough free time to do everything that I've been wanting to do...

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