Fic: (NaNo) The Citadel - chapter 4
title: The Citadel - chapter 4
rating: NC-17, PG-13 for this part
summary: Sci-Fi AU: Several decades in the future, Dominic, Billy, and the rest of the guys work and live on an orbiting space station, which gets infected and taken over by an alien force. The boys have to fight the evil stuff and save the day. :)
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Here commences the Your!Viggo fangirling.
“Probably. But only if he has a good reason to doubt it’s from Earth. Viggo’s a big believer in aliens, and it annoys him to no end that astronauts haven’t found fossils on Mars.”
ROFL!! That is so great. I AM ALSO ANNOYED. but not as much as Viggo.
Only a moment later, a man appeared, dragging a small cart filled with rakes, shovels, and saws behind him. He was barefoot, and he had a cloth knapsack slung over one shoulder. His trousers had holes in the knees and were grass-stained at the cuffs, and his thin button-down shirt was unbuttoned to the middle of his chest.
Jen, that's like, the perfectest intro/description for Viggo EVER. BAREFOOT, THANK YOU. HEEE.
Viggo stopped and plucked a handful of berries off an overhanging tree and handed them to Dominic. “You look hungry,” he explained. Dominic smiled at popped one of the berries into his mouth gratefully.
LOL He has that psychic-caring thing about him, yeah.
Viggo draped his arm over Dominic’s shoulders and kissed the top of his head. “It didn’t take you long to find your way around after that.”
“I had an excellent guide,” Dominic answered, relaxing into Viggo’s muscular body.
HEE AFFECTION.
You are wonderful. OMG IT GREW SO MUCH. And hinting at a special name. LOVELY. ♥
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LOL I KNEW YOU'D LOVE VIGGO. I love Viggo too. He's the awesome-est. I could picture him sooo clearly appearing like that out from behind a large bush, dragging all those gardening tools with him... Oh, Viggo. ♥ I'm also annoyed about the lack of fossils! You'd think we'd have found something by now... >.<
I'm tempted to slash Viggo and Dom in this, but I will refrain. :X LOL They can stick with the mutual respect and friendship. Viggo and Dom are like, thisclose to being in love, and probably would be if not for Billy. LOL Unlike Dom with Elijah... there's only friendship there. I just can't bring myself to slash them... LOL
and omg, starting with, like, the first few paragraphs of the next chapter, things start to happen really fast. I wish I could post, like, NOW but it's not finished being written yet! LOL
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Yeah, I could see the affection, but not slashy in THIS fic. though you should so write that someday And Dom & Lij, no. No slashing. THANK YOU. LOL
WOO. That's like the formula for the best books and movies. Start kinda slow to get the readers used to it and used to the characters and setup, and then BOOM OMG SHIT HAPPENS.
ranDOMly, have you watched Ross Noble yet? LOL
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HEE, I should write a little AU-of-the-AU ficlet of that. Dom/Viggo <3. :P
LOL yeah, the next bit is very OMG/WTF/OH SHIT. :P
NO, I have not. >.< I wish I had enough free time to do everything that I've been wanting to do...
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LOL YES. Dom/Viggo anything is wonderful. :D
*BOUNCES* I CAN'T WAIT. It's always so much fun when it all goes to Hell. :D
Awwwwwwww *pets* Poor brainspouse. You should, though, when you have free time. Though writing comes first. LOL I only remembered about Ross Noble cuz he did this bit about News shows bombarding you with shit and he's like "BAD SHIT HAPPENING IN THE WORLD, NO, KEEP WATCHING, MORE BAD SHIT, HAPPENING IN THE WORLD, BADSHITHAPPENINGINTHEWORLD, AND THEN IT SCROLLS ALONG THE BOTTOM! MORE BAD SHIT!" ROFL
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There's this part that I was writing last night that takes place like, WAAAAY ahead of where I am now, and it's a Dom/Viggo scene and Viggo's being all comforting and awesome and it's very awwwww. The thing is, I'm not exactly sure how soon I can insert that scene... LOL
ROFL omg that's awesome. I'll definitely hafta take a look at it soon. :P
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HEE YES. He talks to the audience a LOT and goes on more tangents than EDDIE. I was dying laughing. *giggles*
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