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Alone........ Part II

Feb 13, 2008 03:04

The continuation of my Jake & Heath RPS, Alone......

It hadn’t taken long - ten days maybe - before reality had hit them dead center. Heath had had his first close call leaving Jake’s trailer at four in the morning, then later that same day he’d overheard some speculation about the love scenes, someone wondering how much they were having to fake it ( Read more... )

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samtyr February 13 2008, 13:56:55 UTC

This is some of you best writing ever. It hurt to read yeah, but it is really good. If only this were an AU and not reality...

sienata February 13 2008, 21:50:33 UTC

thanks for that... i'm glad you enjoyed it. sometimes i feel like i'm doing better, sometimes i'm not so good. thanks for going along with my emotions. it helps to have you guys here with me. hugs. s.

cornflake2912 February 13 2008, 14:04:40 UTC

I´m speechless. Never wanted to read RPS again, but I did. I started crying... omg, that sounds so true. Maybe you´re right. Maybe it was exactly like that!

Thank you..

sienata February 13 2008, 21:53:05 UTC

thanks for reading. i have no idea how it really went down, but, yeah, like you, i think it could've been something like this. it's the way i like to imagine it anyway.

sorry i made you cry. i'm making me cry too, a lot, but that's ok. it's good to be sad sometimes. take care. s.

Very moving cazzyj6740 February 13 2008, 14:24:07 UTC

What a wonderful and heartbreaking story. Very good job. Thanks for sharing this with us.

Re: Very moving sienata February 13 2008, 21:53:54 UTC

thanks for reading. i'm glad you enjoyed it. s.

carol1943 February 13 2008, 14:28:48 UTC

Thank you. I think this is how we ALL feel right now... just alone.

Carol

sienata February 13 2008, 21:54:54 UTC

yes, i feel like i've lost someone that i really knew and loved. my heart is still so sad. thanks for reading and commenting. having you guys around helps. s.

jacks_key February 13 2008, 14:35:54 UTC

You did an excellent job with this. I don't know when, if ever, I will go back to writing RPS, but I still read it, and this was wonderful.

*hugs*

sienata February 13 2008, 21:56:57 UTC

I don't know if i will be able to write any more rps or not, but i really wanted to write this, kind of a farewell to that genre for me, maybe. Or who knows, i might write some more, i'm driven by mood in this case.... if that's where my heads at, that's what i'll write. we'll just see.

thanks so much for reading and always supporting my work. it means so much to me, especially now. hugs. s.