Alone........ Part II

[sienata]

 
The continuation of my Jake & Heath RPS, Alone......

It hadn’t taken long - ten days maybe - before reality had hit them dead center. Heath had had his first close call leaving Jake’s trailer at four in the morning, then later that same day he’d overheard some speculation about the love scenes, someone wondering how much they were having to fake it

Comments

Very moving!

[madbottoms]

Oh my! I can't even adequately describe the emotions I am feeling. I actually sobbed when I read Jake thinking what it would be like to drown but then decide that wasn't an option - Matilda needed him.

Looking at your 'mood' I have to agree with you. that word really doesn't give credit to how we really feel. But then sometimes words are never enough. However, you have done a wonderful job expressing it in this piece of writing.

Thank you.

Hugs

Sandy

Re: Very moving!

[sienata]

Thanks for reading. I'm still having a really hard time. Writing this probably didn't help, but it's where I'm at right now. I'n not going to fight it. I'll move on when the time is right. Thanks for reading. I'm glad it touched you. S.

[tmn1966]

Thanks for sharing this. It was a bit hard to read, so I can only imagine how hard it was for you to write. I'm glad you were able to write it though.

Lots of hugs,
Teri

[sienata]

Hey. I got your message. I've been thinking about you a lot. Thanks for reading this. I'm not making much sense today. Sorry. hugs... s.

[tmn1966]

That's okay, I'm not making much sense today either. :)

You take the time you need and write whatever comes out. I sure know that sometimes you intend something totally different than what actually comes out on the page.

Writing has helped me tremendously (the next chapter should be going to be beta-ed tonight) along with the support of people like you.

Your writing means an awful lot to me. All of it. It's worth waiting for every time, no matter how long it may take. You take a break if you need it.

Hugs,
Teri

[torry28]

Very sad indeed if it really could have been like that and they would have been able to see each other and work things out. IF.
Damn why can't life be more like fiction? How much happier we could all be if we could write our own lives history and change the pages to suit our own needs?
Thank you for sharing this it must have been very difficult to write and I thank you it shows your great love for them.
Torry

[sienata]

Yes, it was very hard to write. Thanks for reading and sharing my sadness. Hopefully life will look brighter soon. S.

[maria47]

Hi Jáne,
you know I like your writing because it is so lighthearted, always able to bring me into a good mood even when I'm down. But I have to admit that this 2parter knocked me of my feet, floored me. I didn't think you could write any better than you did until now, but this sad one is your masterpiece. Everything, the dialogues, the settings, the emotions - it is as if the protagonists themselves had written it all down without hesitation to pour out their hearts.

Hugs
Maria

[sienata]

Thanks maria. I hope you weren't expecting anything light hearted here. I tried to write an adequate note to let folks know what they were getting into. I am so sad today that I can't even think straight. I'm hoping to get back to my happier stuff soon. I know that will cheer me up, but in a way I almost don't want to let go of the sadness, like if i do, i've lost that last part of him.

shoot me. hugs. s.

[sienata]

I'm glad reading helps you. I don't know what I would do if I didn't have my writing and you guys to support and encourage me. Your comments keep me from feeling so alone.

thanks. s.