five mornings in New York

[shuu_cream]

Title: Five mornings in New York.
Pairing: Akame
Rating: G through to NC-17 c:
Genre: fluff, smut, romance, AU
Disclaimer: I own nothing and nobody regarding the real boys D8 ..but in this case, the Jin belongs to me and the Kame is sweetpaopuwind‘s

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[shuu_cream]

First comment saved for Toriiii~ ♥

Guuuuuuh~

[sweetpaopuwind]

Don't know where to start with this except guuuuuuh~ Oh, my God, I love it so much when you write them, and I think I might have to post the fic I did of them that's still in limbo in response even though it's nowhere near as long or awesome as this is~ *_* <3

So...yeah~ From the top. x3

I love that you put Alejandro in there. Don't know if you've noticed or not, but with Kame taking English more seriously, he's starting to get more interested in Western popular music, so there could easily be more references to Gaga and other artists in the future if you or Jin wanted. And...given the conversation last night, I think there needs to be. xD

orz You're really going to regret giving me three of the five scenes early when I say this, but...it's hard to find stuff to comment on when I'm already familiar with it. I'll pick out as much amazing stuff to reply to as I can, but hopefully this won't turn into a fail comment. >< I'm really sorry... I didn't mean for that to happen

Re: Guuuuuuh~

[sweetpaopuwind]

Okay, so...third scene. I...gah. I immediately felt myself start to get sucked into it when I started reading it. It was like flipping a switch. Your style changes so much when your prose is meant to be romantic. It's easily what you're strongest at, I think. It's really beautiful. <3

...And back to quoting. xD

if he thinks he’s been caught, glances away with a mischievous smile.

Could easily see Kame doing that. <3

Can't comment on Jin watching Kame sleep and thinking about what he wants to do other than to say that I got sucked into it. There's seriously a lyrical quality to your writing~

iprhgapigsjrphirj <333 again at Jin and then the description of Kame moving from dream to dream and the relationship between what's happening to his body and what's playing in his mind when Jin starts going down on him

Re: Guuuuuuh~

[sweetpaopuwind]

For several long, boring minutes, Jin just sits there. Head rested against the back of the couch and eyes dull as he stares up at the ceiling, he traces the knots in the wood for lack of anything better to do.

That's a really pretty mental image. Very Jin. <3

“You know,” Jin ventures softly, when what seemed to him like the most obvious thing about the situation had yet to dawn on Kame, “That if no one else from your class can make it in either, they’ll just hold the test off until another day.”...I cracked up at that. Especially Kame's reaction. xD It blows my mind that his first thought to seeing a ton of snow outside wouldn't be, "Whoo, school's canceled!" but...it's Kame. He's so gung-ho about work that it so wouldn't even cross his mind. x3

[abi_manyu]

lovely...
it's deep..
i love it.. the 'fatsu and furu' part.. XD
thank you.. ^^

[shuu_cream]

Thank you ♥ I'm glad you like it~

[death_note13]

Cute. This ♥ Gah. incoherency at its best, obviously.

I just...I want to quote; but...comments are too small to quote the wholllllle thing D:

♥ But uhm ;D Yeah. Distracting me from what I was writing angsty psychological gore uh...not nice. XD

I just... l;kdjfas ♥ Your writing is just so...amazing ♥

[shuu_cream]

Thank you~ ♥
Oh .A. angsty psychological gore is something I especially shouldn't be distracting you from >> relevant to my interests as it is XD

Thank you x3

[mercy_xd]

sweet:)

thanks for sharing this:D

[agustin1982]

I LOVE IT XD XD XD

[agustin1982]

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So awesomeeee♥♥♥♥♥♥