The world was built for two (part ii)

Jun 25, 2012 14:58

The world was built for two (part ii)
Minseok/Luhan/Yixing (side: Sehun/Luhan, Baekhyun/Chanyeol, others)
NC-17 | 9225 words
Yixing's caught in this dance with no rules and everything always comes back to Luhan

Luhan’s not spread out between them now though and there’s a silence that stretches on for a little too long. )

xiuhanlay, xiuhan, layhan, baekhyeol

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emberberry June 25 2012, 05:37:18 UTC
I NEED TO SPOT HERE TOO OKAY I LOVE YOU OMG

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shihan_ai June 25 2012, 10:01:36 UTC
LOL YOU ARE SUCH A DORK ILU SO MUCH

also I need to stop forgetting to spot you haha

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emberberry June 26 2012, 23:32:58 UTC
SOMEONE HAS TO LOVE ME SO I'M GLAD IT'S YOU BECAUSE I LOVE YOU (lmfao earlier today I was texting Monica and my phone corrected 'love' to 'life' so now we life each other)

IT'S OKAY lol you linked me so I could spot on my own :3 also I forgot to spot you on my sekai and my taokai but I wasn't sure if you wanted spots??

OKAY GIMME A MOMENT TO COLLECT MY THOUGHTS PROPERLY I WILL BE BACK WITH COMMENTS FULL OF FEELINGS ON PARTS 1 & 2

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shihan_ai June 27 2012, 00:06:57 UTC
CRIES 'LIFE EACH OTHER' THE THREE OF US JESUS LOL.

k a i j a you know i always read all your fics, even if it's the most random ass pairing that you cook up haha. but you dont have to spot me, i'll just roll in late and wordspew a lot and other people can judge me lol

ASKLDFJA I CANT WAIT. COMMENTS OF FEELINGS ARE THE BEST COMMENTS :3

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13fireflies June 25 2012, 05:37:18 UTC
OMG

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13fireflies June 25 2012, 05:39:06 UTC
SPOTTING THIS FOR NOW BECAUSE I HAVE TO GO TO SLEEP ;______;
BE BACK TOMORROW ALSKFNJSJFJSJAKFNJDS

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shihan_ai June 25 2012, 10:06:58 UTC
JESS

I was just debating whether to link you on twitter when you said u were going to sleep haha

Timezones :( hehe I will just party here until you get back <3

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13fireflies June 28 2012, 03:11:18 UTC
SOBS i swear i was supposed to be back sooner but then i had to prepare for prom but it's finally overrrr and i'm back /runs to read
/inserts very appropriate luhan gif

... )

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shizukusa June 25 2012, 08:21:24 UTC
i like this a lot. um, seriously, i can't find the words to describe how much i love this? but this is absolutely perfect. the length is perfect, the way you develop this story and the way lay comes into luhan/xiumin's relationship but it's not enough. i love your lay, god, and it's sort of heartbreaking (esp. since i ship layhan way too hard lol ;;) but i love how he comes to terms with it. i love everyone you've written in here actually, luhan (and his niceness because he does care for lay so much!! :() and xiumin and the baekhyun/lay friendship (one of my favourite parts ugh i adore the way you've written their dynamic and how baekhyun is always there for lay) and um there are way too many things i love about this fic? the development, the sehun/luhan, the way xiumin comes into their lives and changes everything, luhan's confession about xiumin being "the one"... yeah i pretty much love everything about this fic. even if it is heartbreaking :( this is a lovely, lovely fic and it's definitely among my favourites in this fandom, ngl ( ... )

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shihan_ai June 25 2012, 10:24:11 UTC
Thank you for such an amazing comment!

I'm so glad you liked this, especially given how long it is and how it's not exactly a happy story.

I adore layhan so so much and they just lend themselves to a complex unrequited relationship like this really well, as much as it pains me to torture them...but I also have such a weakness for xiuhan haha ^^'

Yay for baeklay friendship :3 im beyond happy you loved the little things as well and adjfsjd you are far too kind but thank you so much for saying that! <3

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pollutedlungs June 25 2012, 09:08:22 UTC
This was really really beautiful. Heartbreaking, but beautiful. I want to hate Minseok because he's in the way, but he really isn't doing anything wrong and I want to hate Luhan for being stupid and not returning Yixing's feelings, but you can't force love. No one is to blame in this fic and that's probably what makes it so hard to get through. By the end of the story, I really just wanted to push Luhan out of the picture completely (and I love Luhan) because he was tearing Yixing apart.

I really loved this. The entire piece was so bittersweet and I liked that. Thank you for writing. <3

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shihan_ai June 25 2012, 10:33:49 UTC
I'm so glad the angst didn't put you off :)

It makes me happy to hear you say that, because when I was writing I considered whether people might hate minseok or luhan for what they're doing to yixing (regardless of if it's malicious or not). It's not an easy fic to get thorouh especially because of all the yixing pain and I'm glad you liked it anyway!

Thank you for reading and commenting~

PS. I really love your username

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stupidrhapsody June 25 2012, 09:32:34 UTC


... )

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shihan_ai June 25 2012, 10:41:53 UTC
Askfjhksj minseokie~~

Idek but your comment just made me tingle oh my god ;__;

Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm so thrilled that it had such an impact on you; apologies for the angst galore ^^'

<3

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