The world was built for two (part ii)
Minseok/Luhan/Yixing (side: Sehun/Luhan, Baekhyun/Chanyeol, others)
NC-17 | 9225 words
Yixing's caught in this dance with no rules and everything always comes back to Luhan
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Luhan’s not spread out between them now though and there’s a silence that stretches on for a little too long. )
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your writing is incredible and your characterizations are so great oh godd. i loved each paragraph's delivery and the melting of lay's love and luhan's love and their relationships with each other dear god.
just really lovely and i can't get over it omfgalksdl;c;a;;fa;d;
gonna go and reread it again haha wow so lovely alghhugu
;ad;;a; /melts
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haha with a wordcount like this? i feel so humbled~
also, i'm just creeping on your journal and akldsjfdasklfj all the xiuhan love, i'm so happy i think i could cry /goes and reads
♥
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i absolutely adore xiuhan, just because they are so, so cute in real life and they have a really good playful dynamic. but layhan gives me angsty unrequited feelings. haha i understand, even when writing this I was like 'oh god i need luhan to love yixing back and stop breaking his heart' but then obviously not, because Xiuhan
baekyeol is just the cutest and I just had to give Yixing a friend in this fic, someone he can lean on, because even though he and luhan are close, he can't very well talk to him about his feelings. And yeah, Baekhyun gave him tickets to Tokyo, because he knows just how much this relationship is breaking Yixing down and he wants his friends to go and live his own life~
i'm so glad you liked the ending, because it's definitely bittersweet and I was a little hesitant because I felt like people might want a more happy or at least concrete ending, but this was just the logical ending for me.
thank you for reading and commenting, dear! i really appreciate it :)
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Legit spent three minutes crying in the bathroom. Now my face is all red. Huh, still shaking now T____T
It's really painful how much in love Yixing is with Luhan. When he tries to convince himself when deep down he knows, and how truly happy he is when Luhan's with him. Really, really.
“I want Luhan to come with me. I want to get lost in Tokyo with him.”I went Baekhyun at this. like oh, oh, yixing oh my god let me give you a hug ;___ ( ... )
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yeah, yixing is truly and deeply head over heels in love with luhan and it's not a fleeting or purely physical thing either and even writing this, a part of me just wanted to give him his happy ending, but that's not how love works...
it makes me so happy to hear that, because I was concerned people might think unfavorably of luhan or minseok, but yeah, luhan has always been in love with minseok and yixing had fallen for him along the way, but minseok was always the one. i'm so glad you liked the xiuhan, because I didn't focus on them as much, but yay
baekhyun is light the light in the darkness for yixing and for this fic; i love him so much :3
thank you for reading and commenting, your words make my heart swell :)
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keyboard smashes are the only way to express my love for this fic
also, I really loved the baekyeol in this; turbulent and fast-paced relationships are intense and interesting to read about, but sometimes, I really just want to see a happy, loving couple :3
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i'm so glad you liked this and yes like you said, there two kinds of relationships are both interesting, but we need some non-dramatic, cute fluff to balance out the angst heh
thanks for reading and commenting!
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Sorry for not reading this, I know nothing about those boys...
I just wanted to tell you I miss you <3
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-clings to you-
aww it's okay, you don't have to read, i'm just glad you're here :3 I MISS YOU TOO~~~
but it's kinda funny because their song is called mama why am i still talking haha
<3
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But I am planning my comeback to writings (though I stick to my otp even if nearly no one ships it anymore(
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:DDD YESSS DO WANT. AND PEOPLE STILL DO, THEY JUST DONT FIC IT AS MUCH :S
/CANT WAIT
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