The world was built for two (part ii)

Jun 25, 2012 14:58

The world was built for two (part ii)
Minseok/Luhan/Yixing (side: Sehun/Luhan, Baekhyun/Chanyeol, others)
NC-17 | 9225 words
Yixing's caught in this dance with no rules and everything always comes back to Luhan

Luhan’s not spread out between them now though and there’s a silence that stretches on for a little too long. )

xiuhanlay, xiuhan, layhan, baekhyeol

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shizukusa June 25 2012, 08:21:24 UTC
i like this a lot. um, seriously, i can't find the words to describe how much i love this? but this is absolutely perfect. the length is perfect, the way you develop this story and the way lay comes into luhan/xiumin's relationship but it's not enough. i love your lay, god, and it's sort of heartbreaking (esp. since i ship layhan way too hard lol ;;) but i love how he comes to terms with it. i love everyone you've written in here actually, luhan (and his niceness because he does care for lay so much!! :() and xiumin and the baekhyun/lay friendship (one of my favourite parts ugh i adore the way you've written their dynamic and how baekhyun is always there for lay) and um there are way too many things i love about this fic? the development, the sehun/luhan, the way xiumin comes into their lives and changes everything, luhan's confession about xiumin being "the one"... yeah i pretty much love everything about this fic. even if it is heartbreaking :( this is a lovely, lovely fic and it's definitely among my favourites in this fandom, ngl :( thank you for writing this!

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shihan_ai June 25 2012, 10:24:11 UTC
Thank you for such an amazing comment!

I'm so glad you liked this, especially given how long it is and how it's not exactly a happy story.

I adore layhan so so much and they just lend themselves to a complex unrequited relationship like this really well, as much as it pains me to torture them...but I also have such a weakness for xiuhan haha ^^'

Yay for baeklay friendship :3 im beyond happy you loved the little things as well and adjfsjd you are far too kind but thank you so much for saying that! <3

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