Another Day

Jul 10, 2012 19:38

Title: Another Day
Pairing: Krystal-centric, Krystal/Sehun, Sehun/Lu Han
Rating: R
Summary: Krystal had grown up a lot in the last four years. She still had a temper, still stubborn and too quick with her words, but she had learned to harness these qualities to tame what life threw at her, because it could be so unexpected, difficult, and amazing. ( Read more... )

pairing: krystal/sehun, fandom: f(x), rating: r, fandom: exo, pairing: sehun/lu han, format: one shot

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cinnabun11 July 11 2012, 16:58:58 UTC
omg I enjoyed this so much!! you explained things it great detail that made me really relate and feel for the characters. I never got bored (as I often do with long-ish fics). Great job!!

Her mother had wiggled her eyebrows suggestively at her when she saw Jongin and Krystal had been horrified that her mother had just wiggled her eyebrows suggestively.
Sehun visibly deflated.
lol at these

The swell of affection Krystal felt for Sehun at that moment bloomed warm and solid in her chest. "Maybe later?"
I can really relate to this line because I've felt that so many times

The thought of waking up in that bed, wrapped in Sehun's arms, the morning light streaming in through the window flashed across Krystal's mind and she flushed. She wanted to drag Sehun back into the room and push him into bed. Fuck the entrance exams.
so cute

He looked up at her, his face flushed and Krystal could see, still so full of love for her. She was going to take this moment and keep it safe, deep in her heart, where no one can ever take it from her. It ( ... )

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shesimplysmiles July 11 2012, 23:35:46 UTC
dkjsjfakldsjl Thank you so much for your kind words. One of my goals for this fic definitely was to be more detailed and try to add more background info to the characters, so I'm so thrilled that you pointed it out.

And ;~~~~~~~; I love you so much for pointing out the parts you liked ;~~~~;

I'm so glad you enjoyed it and thank you again for your wonderful comment. ♥

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alexaneko July 12 2012, 20:47:57 UTC
i've never thought that i would read a krystal-centric with out scrolling, but you've proved me i was wrong and i want to thank you for that because this thing was great. now Hit the Ground Running is so much more complete i think i can really feel the story now, thank you!~

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shesimplysmiles July 13 2012, 14:50:10 UTC
:DDDD Thank you so much for giving this fic a chance! ♥

I wanted to challenge myself with writing from Krystal's point of view because up until now, I haven't written for girl groups yet, so I'm really glad and relieved that you liked it. I have to admit that during the writing process I was like, ohhhhh, I hope I don't write myself into a plot hole because something from this fic doesn't correspond with the other one XDDDD. /shifty eyes.

Thank you again for reading and for your wonderful comment

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katrinababs July 23 2012, 16:14:40 UTC
Hi, I just wanted to say that this has got to be my favorite Soojung fic, you portrayed her image so accurately that I wonder if she really feels like that sometimes. This actually got me crying. Haha. I love her too much =))

I never thought that I'd be able to ship Exo with a girl but now I think I'm actually rooting for Soojung's happy ending, instead of Luhan's. Just AFHSJCBSIUHKJCNSIUCBJNSIUKJ. Ugh.

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shesimplysmiles July 26 2012, 03:36:57 UTC
kdj;ajfd;a oh my god, thank you for your wonderful comment ;~~~~;

I definitely have a soft spot for f(x) and I've been wanting to write for them for a while. I actually see a lot of my own little sister in Krystal keke and both of them could be such brats sometimes (much like Sehun rofl). Why are all of SM's maknaes such brats omg (except for Taemin. He's an angel ^__^). My thought of Krystal is that she's really introverted and headstrong a lot of the time, but can also be playful and friendly when she wants to be. But gahhh, thank you for your encouraging comment about my portrayal of her. I definitely wanted to try to get inside her head and I'm really glad that it worked for you

I definitely want to write more f(x) fics, especially since I'm starting to feel a little more confident writing them. As for HunHan, omg, it's like they've taken over my brain ;~~~; i hate them so much gdi.

Thank you so much for reading my fics. ♥ ♥

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katrinababs July 27 2012, 10:42:37 UTC
<3 I'll definitely check your LJ for more! Thaaanks!

(Can I request a crack, college verse one? and a crack gender switch too ;])

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shesimplysmiles July 27 2012, 21:46:04 UTC
omg, rofl, if you're referring to a college au for f(x), I initially was writing one for kryber before I had to scrap it because I had no idea where it was going u___u and amber is still a bit of a mystery to me tbh.

Haha, I've always wanted to do a genderswitch fic. Hunhan is definitely not hard to imagine bc of all the manips floating around rofl rofl. I would definitely give both a shot! However, please keep in mind that I am very slow T__T

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mocchajo August 4 2012, 21:09:13 UTC
Why am I so late in finding out this one OTL

Anyway anyway anyway, I love how this, like Hit the Ground Running, has that slice-of-life feeling that makes it more relatable and remarkable
I'm glad you ended up writing Krystal's part because I thought Sehun wasn't that serious with her and it turned out otherwise and I'm happy about it tbh
I love your Krystal ♥
And of course, the ever-so-chill, coolest parents in the world, Mr and Mrs Oh.

Thank you for writing ♥♥♥

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shesimplysmiles August 6 2012, 03:24:52 UTC
It's because I didn't cross post this to sncj ^__^. It's great to see you again bby ( ... )

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mocchajo August 7 2012, 06:23:01 UTC
Yeah, luckily I checked your journal, like, weekly *creeper mode:on*

And you're so very good at it ♥

Based on HtGR I would've thought she was only a filler character that got sidelined after the main ~realized he can't forget his love~ lol you totally justified her with this

It doesn't! I also think by using canon you were successful in writing with a smoother flow, that it might be more difficult without them known facts, coz they really help with realistic characterization :D

Aww I love leaving comments to express my appreciation for the writers and I'm happy if it makes you happy ;w;
your replies are always so qt too~

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shesimplysmiles August 7 2012, 23:22:46 UTC
I wibbled as usual by your generous words, but okay, how excited am I that you acronym-ed Hit the Ground Running XDD. Nothing looks more official than acronyms trufax.

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shesimplysmiles August 16 2012, 21:05:45 UTC
;______________; Thank you for leaving such a wonderful comment ;____________________;

Okay, now that I got that out of my system...

I definitely wanted to work with the thought of first loves and first heartbreaks and try to fill in a filler character from Hit the Ground Running because Krystal felt like an afterthought there and I definitely regretted that a bit. And because sestal never had any real, substantial interaction in front of us before, i was able to play around a little kekeke. Sometimes I think that Sehun really raises the maternal instinct in a lot of people (including Lu Han heh) and he certainly does that for me oh lordy, so I kind of ran with that in the fic.

I'm really glad you enjoyed it bby. Thank you again ;~~;

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