Prompt Post Part XXVIII

Apr 03, 2012 12:28

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Post-TRF, attempting to carry on, one step at a time anonymous April 13 2012, 19:35:32 UTC
I'm stuck on the image of Mrs Hudson trying to go through Sherlock's things now that he's gone. I suppose I just need some simple, daily-life angst to help me work through what happened. Nothing in particular, just some of characters (whoever you like, however you like) taking the next baby steps toward life after "the fall."

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Boxes 1/? anonymous April 13 2012, 23:36:19 UTC
I love prompts like this! Warnings for TRF spoilers, of course.

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"All right, mate?"

The cabbie has every right to wonder. They've arrived, after all. They're parked in front of 221B Baker Street, and John is simply sitting, staring straight ahead, giving no indication he's going anywhere.

He's a fly caught in amber, a fossil in stone. He can't move.

The cabbie turns, an expression of growing concern replacing his impatient scowl.

"Give us just a mo', please?" John mutters. He pulls out his mobile with grim determination, as if he's drawing his sidearm.

Mrs Hudson's greeting is warm and grounding, but it doesn't hold the key that unlocks his traitorous legs. He kneads a hard fist into his thigh and imagines a bruise blossoming beneath sturdy denim.

"Hello, Mrs Hudson."

"Oh, John. It's good of you to ring." After a beat, "I came across some things, dear. Tidying up."

Not packing, bless her. Nothing so final.

"Detective things, you know, mementos from your cases," she continues. "I thought… well, he'd want you to have ( ... )

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Boxes 2/? anonymous April 14 2012, 03:17:13 UTC
2 ( ... )

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Re: Boxes 2/? anonymous April 14 2012, 03:28:34 UTC
OMG, so much love for this. I really like how you're using the "boxes" idea. And you're ripping my heart out with this angsty scenes. Please don't stop. ;)

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auth!anon here anonymous April 14 2012, 16:39:15 UTC
Oh, thank you! :D

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Boxes 3/? anonymous April 14 2012, 16:37:53 UTC
3.

It's not the first unexpected surprise she's found in the morgue, but it's far more pleasant than most. Molly instantly knows it's meant for her, just as she knows who must be responsible for it.

The tension and tragedy of these recent days have scoured her raw. A great many feelings flood her at once, and she blinks away the promise of tears.

How he found time for this, how he managed the logistics of the delivery, she cannot imagine.

Not chocolates, she guesses. Nothing so trite. Nothing so easily misconstrued as a clichéd romantic gesture.

She opens the bakery box with reverent hands. She tries to see and to observe, to read the meanings behind this gesture ( ... )

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Re: Boxes 3/? anonymous April 14 2012, 19:32:45 UTC
Aw. AWWW!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm still loving this!

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auth!anon here anonymous April 15 2012, 20:22:50 UTC
I'm so glad! Thank you very much. :D

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Boxes 4/6 anonymous April 15 2012, 12:45:20 UTC
4.

His hands are thrust deep into his pockets. His shoulder rests against the wall. He's… well, not hunched, not exactly, but braced, as if unsure of his welcome. His gaze is fixed on the pavement as she opens the door ( ... )

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Boxes 5/6 anonymous April 15 2012, 18:03:13 UTC
5 ( ... )

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<3 <3 <3 anonymous April 15 2012, 19:05:10 UTC
This is beautiful.

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auth!anon anonymous April 16 2012, 10:25:30 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm really delighted that you like it.

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Re: Boxes 5/6 221b_hound April 15 2012, 23:46:02 UTC
This is wonderful: excellent use of the theme and imagery, and the picture you're building is so detailed. I can't wait for the last part!

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auth!anon anonymous April 16 2012, 10:26:31 UTC
Oh, thank you so much for this! This makes me so happy. I really appreciate it. The final part will be up very, very soon. :)

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Boxes 6/6 anonymous April 16 2012, 17:16:49 UTC
EPILOGUE

It's a charming cottage, and John imagines it will require little effort to make it feel like a home.

As he waits for the kettle to boil, he wanders to the sitting room. He's found the perfect spot for his desk, near enough to the fire to be cosy on winter evenings. Perhaps he'll finally do as Greg suggests and edit his old blog posts together into book form.

For now the room is a forest of boxes. If he doesn't unpack them, the chore won't be done. The hives have Sherlock's full attention.

He turns to the nearest box and opens its flaps.

And he is ambushed.

He stares. Time passes.

"John?" Sherlock's tone makes it clear this isn't the first time he's said the name.

With a deep breath, John pulls himself back to the present. "Look what I found." He holds his discovery up for inspection.

"The ear hat, John? Really ( ... )

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Re: Boxes 6/6 innie_darling April 17 2012, 01:01:36 UTC
I really enjoyed this, part 2 especially.

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