Remix of cherrytide: “Do Your Research” (2/2)

Sep 23, 2015 14:24

Original Story:
Author: cherrytide
Title & Link: Proxy
Pairings & Rating: none & mature
Warnings/Content Notes: Contains descriptions of illness, assault, drug use, infidelity and abuse.

Remix Story:
Author: dioscureantwins
Title: Do Your Research
Pairings & Rating: none & mature
Warnings/Content Notes: Contains descriptions of rape, drug use, infidelity, suicide ( Read more... )

cherrytide, verse: bbc, dioscureantwins, fanwork: fic, challenge: round five, rated: mature

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xfdryad September 25 2015, 20:07:15 UTC
HOW AM I THE FIRST PERSON TO COMMENT ON THIS STORY???

Because holy shit, Nonny, this is fucking amazing! I've always loved the original story, and I adore the fact that you put your from Mummy's perspective, adding in her history and really showing exactly why she did the thing. What makes it even worse is that I, as a mother, can almost understand her reasoning, twisted though it is.

This is just an outstanding job and tbh, makes a hell of a lot more sense than canon (sorry, BC's parents!). Ugh, the feels!

ETA: As a bookseller irl, I can only hope you are working on publication, because your writing skills make me want to cry with joy.

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dioscureantwins October 5 2015, 19:57:10 UTC
Well, it's not exactly a nice story, is it?

And I fully realise, despite you're very kind remark regarding my writing skills, a lot of people don't like my writing style, which is way too elaborate for most tastes. Still, I'm always hugging myself with glee when someone leaves me a nice comment like yours, so thank you ever so much.

Do you know, I think almost every story featuring the parents and written before S3 makes more sense than the pairing Moftiss gave us. The parents felt like a slap to my face. But then almost the whole of S3 felt like a slap to my face. :)

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cherrytide September 26 2015, 00:22:45 UTC
First off, apologies for taking so long to comment! Real life has been busy, and I wanted to really savour this story before commenting ( ... )

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dioscureantwins October 5 2015, 20:28:34 UTC
I'm so totally delighted to read you don't mind I picked this story to remix. I realise now I've never left a comment on it while it is in fact my fav story of those written by you and frankly I'm amazed nobody has chosen to remix this before. Well, lucky me, for now I could have my wicked way with it ( ... )

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cherrytide October 14 2015, 18:37:44 UTC
Apologies for the super late reply!

I'm so totally delighted to read you don't mind I picked this story to remix.

Not at all, when I saw which story had been remixed I wanted to do a little skip of excitement! Reading it I thought I recognised your style but I wasn't sure... But I'm so pleased it was you who remixed it too! I couldn't have asked for a more adventurous or skilled remixer...

It's so easy to condemn and despise, isn't it, to christen people with monikers and label them. But it's much more interesting to try and find out what exactly motivated them and why they committed their atrocious actions.Quite, it's a great motivation to write! I always did intend there to be at least a potential shadow of doubt in the reader's mind regarding Mummy's motives - is she revealing her true nature to Mycroft in that prison cell or saving face, and manipulating him again? Either way she's a deeply troubled and terrible person of course. I love that you explored her humanity here though, without making excuses for the sick things ( ... )

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dioscureantwins October 18 2015, 12:28:01 UTC
You're being far too kind and you know it.

That shadow of a doubt was always there for me throughout your story. The very fact that Mycroft wasn't treated to this peculiar form of motherly love, which would have been far easier for Violet, made me suspect there must be more to the story than one would believe.

Remixing your story has been such a wonderful experience for me. Thank you again.

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obscuriglobus September 27 2015, 11:33:48 UTC
I love how even at the end, after all she's confessed, she still see's herself as the victim. Great writing :)

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dioscureantwins October 5 2015, 19:59:14 UTC
Thank you!

And in a way she's a victim. Of her own inclinations and obsessions. She's a very good example of oneself being one's worst enemy I think.

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simplystars September 28 2015, 00:12:58 UTC
What a fabulous and equally twisted partner to the original story... Just simply amazing.

O_O

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dioscureantwins October 5 2015, 19:58:05 UTC
I worked very hard to do the original the justice it deserved. Happy to read you think I might have succeeded (a bit).

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nox_candida October 7 2015, 04:13:05 UTC
This was truly an outstanding, amazing story ( ... )

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dioscureantwins October 7 2015, 19:16:50 UTC
Thank you ( ... )

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