THE LAST NOTE: Needed Flaw

Jan 21, 2009 16:48

Title: The Last Note
Genre: Romance {Yaoi}, Drama.
Characters: Yoochun, Junsu, Changmin.
Pairing: Yoochun & Junsu
Rating: PG-13

Synopsis: Kim Junsu, a professor who has yet to turn twenty one, is being transferred to a new university, where he finds a music room on his first day after a conflict with a student. He begins to frequent the room to play ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, length: chaptered, title: tln, genre: drama, genre: romance, genre: fluff, char: yoochun/junsu

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sheerab January 21 2009, 09:41:34 UTC
SPOT FOR DONGBANGSUJU20!

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dongbangsuju20 January 21 2009, 10:09:23 UTC
OMG i love you T_T
that is sooooo nice T_T
*happy*

because i am always~ too late, but now.. not |D'

but thank you TT
*will write a super uber long comment for thank* <33

luv ya <3

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sheerab January 22 2009, 14:47:33 UTC
:D!

I SEE YOU REALLY SPOTTED~!
*huggles*

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dongbangsuju20 January 22 2009, 15:08:51 UTC
yeahh, for the first time *haha*

it was because of your spot for me <3
*hihi*
it gave me luck ^-^

*huggles back*

i hope you like the comment .. *hehe* ^^''
i tried to make the quotes not too long this time XD
hope you still get what part of the chapter i mean |D'

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dongbangsuju20 January 21 2009, 10:08:24 UTC
REAL SPOT!! <3
i will read it when i am home >.<
*at school*

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dongbangsuju20 January 21 2009, 21:37:35 UTC
okay, here we go XD
finally x.x'' XD'

“Please tell me I’m not involved,” Junsu narrowed his eyes and silently prayed-

“You are.” -But his prayers went unheard.

sumhow i like this lines because of the writing style <3
with the prayers |D
of course you are junsu, with this awesome voice *hehe*

~

“Yoochun paints?”

“Uh huh. Supposedly well I believe. But he never shows anybody else his art and I don’t know why.”

heeey, was all the thing with the 'famous', 'mysterious' stranger just to fool us?! xDD
maybe chunnie is the one?! could imagine this very well °°
ahh, want still know this >.< XDD

~

“I live… in a hideous shed…” Junsu yawned.

“I love hideous sheds!” Yoochun exclaimed, not even sure of what he was talking about. “They’re warm and cozy! Perfect place to be for the weather! And you have to show me the costumes for dance night remember?”

this makes me smile *hehe* <3
sumhow it touched me.. aish, don't ask, but like especially this sentence in this scene ^-^
but the whole scene is uber cute <3 ( ... )

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dongbangsuju20 January 21 2009, 21:38:12 UTC
here we go with the next part.. haha, somehow this is the normal state now?! with two comments..
haha, i am sorry ^^'''

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It feels like…

Yoochun’s eyes opened bleakly. He’d recognized that voice anywhere.

…beautiful thing.

do you know what..?! XD
first thing which came in my mind when i read 'it feels like' was 'purple line' where this beginning is like 'it feels like.. purple line' XDDD
ah, sorry |D
this is beautiful, the whole moment, but everytime when i see this line i have to think at first about the song XDDD

Chunnie?” Junsu stood back, and saw that Yoochun’s eyes were beginning to tear.

“I’m so proud of you Junnie,” Yoochun sniffed, “So proud of you.”

“And you call me a crybaby,” Junsu teased with a grin.

“Shut up. I’m sentimental.”

FTW!! <3
ah wait.. word~ XD
perfect, delightful..
<33
sentimental!chunnie is love <3 ( ... )

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freya_xiah January 21 2009, 10:13:57 UTC
what happen at the end...
i smell something bad happen...???

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sheerab January 22 2009, 15:02:26 UTC
*cackles*

I cannot teeeell youuu~!XD

TY for reading! ^^

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jing_16 January 21 2009, 14:19:14 UTC
OMG.UPDATE!

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jing_16 January 21 2009, 14:43:53 UTC
OMFG.what is happening to my yoochun's baby?did the blackout during the dance mean smth?

lmao @ junsu's engrish that sounds like kenyan =)

MORE MORE updates pls!

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sheerab January 23 2009, 14:18:44 UTC
yoochun's baby is going to run away and be mine *slapped*. the blackout. call it a 'preview' if you will?

i love junsu's kenyan! bambamya~

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jing_16 January 23 2009, 15:38:01 UTC
SO SUSU IS BECOMING BLIND. *CRIES*
he has blue eyes cause it is like some kind of disease/or whatever that is abnormal and that he'll become blind one day?my poor baby always suffers in fanfic.deaf,blind,death...

yoochun is the painter right right?why didnt he tell su that?

aw, as much as i've enjoyed the diabetic sweet fluff, i'm looking forward to the angst! I LOVE ANGST.

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perfectstart January 21 2009, 14:24:38 UTC
OH NO!
SU, NO. FLAWLESS PLEASE~

:D THANK YOU! (I need more yoosu fics ): )

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sheerab January 23 2009, 14:20:04 UTC
junsu is perfect. definitely.

thank you for reading :D (hahaha ysywh is the best fandom.)

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