THE LAST NOTE: Needed Flaw

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Title: The Last Note
Genre: Romance {Yaoi}, Drama.
Characters: Yoochun, Junsu, Changmin.
Pairing: Yoochun & Junsu
Rating: PG-13

Synopsis: Kim Junsu, a professor who has yet to turn twenty one, is being transferred to a new university, where he finds a music room on his first day after a conflict with a student. He begins to frequent the room to play

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[dongbangsuju20]

okay, here we go XD
finally x.x'' XD'

“Please tell me I’m not involved,” Junsu narrowed his eyes and silently prayed-

“You are.” -But his prayers went unheard.

sumhow i like this lines because of the writing style <3
with the prayers |D
of course you are junsu, with this awesome voice *hehe*

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“Yoochun paints?”

“Uh huh. Supposedly well I believe. But he never shows anybody else his art and I don’t know why.”

heeey, was all the thing with the 'famous', 'mysterious' stranger just to fool us?! xDD
maybe chunnie is the one?! could imagine this very well °°
ahh, want still know this >.< XDD

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“I live… in a hideous shed…” Junsu yawned.

“I love hideous sheds!” Yoochun exclaimed, not even sure of what he was talking about. “They’re warm and cozy! Perfect place to be for the weather! And you have to show me the costumes for dance night remember?”

this makes me smile *hehe* <3
sumhow it touched me.. aish, don't ask, but like especially this sentence in this scene ^-^
but the whole scene is uber cute <3
how junsu cooked for chunnie and then fed him ^^

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A family of three was standing in the grand garden in front of a grand mansion. A lovely child was posing with a soccer ball while the handsome father was hugging his beautiful wife.

first, soccer ball! yaaay xDDD
soccer is junsu's life.. (yeah i know.. this was one topic in another chapter already, but yeah XD'' had to mention it again XD)
and then i want to know more about his past >.<
with his family and all...
ah, you make me sooo curious >-<

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“But I thought-” Junsu’s expression fell. His eyes dampened with disappointed tears as he hugged the costumes closer to himself, “-Are they that unsightly?”

“ON SECOND THOUGHTS, THESE COSTUMES ARE SO ENDEARING I’M SURE EVERYONE WILL BE PROUD OF US!” Yoochun cried out suddenly, alarmed by the tears threatening to fall, “I’ll… I’ll wear it with you.”

*haha*
junsu knows what to do to get his will XDDD
and chunnie doesn't have any clue that he is this much manipulated of his beloved one |D
i want to have a picture of them wearing the costumes..
okayokay.. i could watch balloons.. but.. the PAIR yoosu XDDD

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“GOD SAVE ME! OH MY! Ahem! Young master… Ahem! You look… greaa…t…” Bae had the shock of his life when he looked through the ajar door.

Yoochun sighed, “Laugh.”

“HAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA! OH OH DEAR, MY BACK! HAHAH!!” Bae laughed on and shut the door, his laughter echoing along the corridors outside the room.

Junsu gaped curiously at the leaving Bae, “He’s so scary.”

heeey, nothing against Bae >-<
i like him, even if I just know him here in you fanfic (wasn't he someone else from the whole music business in reality too?! XD'')
but I like him now, he is so loveable <3

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“I don’t mind,” Yoochun shrugged. “It’s for you.”

Junsu grinned, “Yup. It’s for me, Kim Junsu. And Kim Junsu is not going to let anybody else see you in that costume.”

whole scene so adorable!! <33
especially now junsu x3
i would act the same way!
and.. yeah, to tell the truth.. who would let anybody else see chunnie in this costume?! if he would be junsu.. XDDD
the next with the minnie and micky is.. <3
(ah, again my words run out x-x wait XD' *will search for new better words*)
marvelous!
ha! xDD
okay, next~ XD

[dongbangsuju20]

here we go with the next part.. haha, somehow this is the normal state now?! with two comments..
haha, i am sorry ^^'''

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It feels like…

Yoochun’s eyes opened bleakly. He’d recognized that voice anywhere.

…beautiful thing.

do you know what..?! XD
first thing which came in my mind when i read 'it feels like' was 'purple line' where this beginning is like 'it feels like.. purple line' XDDD
ah, sorry |D
this is beautiful, the whole moment, but everytime when i see this line i have to think at first about the song XDDD

Chunnie?” Junsu stood back, and saw that Yoochun’s eyes were beginning to tear.

“I’m so proud of you Junnie,” Yoochun sniffed, “So proud of you.”

“And you call me a crybaby,” Junsu teased with a grin.

“Shut up. I’m sentimental.”

FTW!! <3
ah wait.. word~ XD
perfect, delightful..
<33
sentimental!chunnie is love <3
especially when junsu is.. .. like this XD (wanted to write dominant, but it doesn't fit really oO)
you know what i mean, i hope XD
(ah, and the imagine how yoosu sing and play on the stage is wonderful <3 love this! you got the two (not THE best but..) best abilities of them together <33)
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It happened all so fast.

for this lines.. my heart stopped a beat i think x-x
i thought 'now beginns the angst and drama and everything'.. 'junsu falls and something bad happens to him' ... and all these things..
but thanks for my heart's health you made it up and everything is still okay.. <33

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And under the moonlight, the lovers continued to dance to the accompaniment of not music, but love.

romantic.. sweet.. tastes like vanilla flavour with yoosu scent
love~ <333

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Was it happening?

i don't know if i really understand what you were saying to me/us (the readers) with these lines...
but now i have an angsty feeling T-T
aww.. soon come the drama and angst.. i feel it >-<
but i will anticipate it.. somehow XD
even if i really like this fluffy, romantic, love-atmosphere QQ

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The flaw had to be removed.

i love this ending..
if it is the introduction to the drama and so on...
maybe.. maybe it is not?! xD
ah, will see next chapter <3
but i LOVE this last line <333

ah yeah, a new chapter that makes me fall in love with your fanfic all over again
*haha*
am i exaggerating?!
haha, don't mind xD
i love your fanfic, you know this..
so no need to over-praise you <3