THE LAST NOTE: Needed Flaw

Jan 21, 2009 16:48

Title: The Last Note
Genre: Romance {Yaoi}, Drama.
Characters: Yoochun, Junsu, Changmin.
Pairing: Yoochun & Junsu
Rating: PG-13

Synopsis: Kim Junsu, a professor who has yet to turn twenty one, is being transferred to a new university, where he finds a music room on his first day after a conflict with a student. He begins to frequent the room to play ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, length: chaptered, title: tln, genre: drama, genre: romance, genre: fluff, char: yoochun/junsu

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dongbangsuju20 January 21 2009, 21:38:12 UTC
here we go with the next part.. haha, somehow this is the normal state now?! with two comments..
haha, i am sorry ^^'''

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It feels like…

Yoochun’s eyes opened bleakly. He’d recognized that voice anywhere.

…beautiful thing.

do you know what..?! XD
first thing which came in my mind when i read 'it feels like' was 'purple line' where this beginning is like 'it feels like.. purple line' XDDD
ah, sorry |D
this is beautiful, the whole moment, but everytime when i see this line i have to think at first about the song XDDD

Chunnie?” Junsu stood back, and saw that Yoochun’s eyes were beginning to tear.

“I’m so proud of you Junnie,” Yoochun sniffed, “So proud of you.”

“And you call me a crybaby,” Junsu teased with a grin.

“Shut up. I’m sentimental.”

FTW!! <3
ah wait.. word~ XD
perfect, delightful..
<33
sentimental!chunnie is love <3
especially when junsu is.. .. like this XD (wanted to write dominant, but it doesn't fit really oO)
you know what i mean, i hope XD
(ah, and the imagine how yoosu sing and play on the stage is wonderful <3 love this! you got the two (not THE best but..) best abilities of them together <33)
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It happened all so fast.

for this lines.. my heart stopped a beat i think x-x
i thought 'now beginns the angst and drama and everything'.. 'junsu falls and something bad happens to him' ... and all these things..
but thanks for my heart's health you made it up and everything is still okay.. <33

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And under the moonlight, the lovers continued to dance to the accompaniment of not music, but love.

romantic.. sweet.. tastes like vanilla flavour with yoosu scent
love~ <333

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Was it happening?

i don't know if i really understand what you were saying to me/us (the readers) with these lines...
but now i have an angsty feeling T-T
aww.. soon come the drama and angst.. i feel it >-<
but i will anticipate it.. somehow XD
even if i really like this fluffy, romantic, love-atmosphere QQ

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The flaw had to be removed.

i love this ending..
if it is the introduction to the drama and so on...
maybe.. maybe it is not?! xD
ah, will see next chapter <3
but i LOVE this last line <333

ah yeah, a new chapter that makes me fall in love with your fanfic all over again
*haha*
am i exaggerating?!
haha, don't mind xD
i love your fanfic, you know this..
so no need to over-praise you <3

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