Action/Adventure, Week 1: Call me Sheppard

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Title: Call me Sheppard
Author: kriadydragon
Genre: Action/Adventure
Prompt: Rivers, oceans or waterways
Word Count: 8600
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Summary: "They were enduring a cliché, a practical real-life remake of jaws, complete with grizzled old sea veteran with a shark fetish. Except it wasn't a shark they were after."
Notes: Beta'd by the awesome wildcat88.

Comments

[brasslizard]

Heee. John and Rodney both made new friends. Great adventure tale; very classic. Love the artwork, too.

[skinscript]

Well done! I like how they slowly figure it out, and how John manages to figure out how the robot is being attracted to its targets.

(aside - there's an author comment embedded that I think was accidentally left in; "****(break here in case the story is too long)****")

Good job.

[gaffsie]

I really liked this! Rodney's new friend in particular; I'd happily read a whole novel about the adventures of Boatmaster Suvvle and his trusty side-kick Softy McKay. ;)

[acari]

That was so much fun. I loved the characterisation and descriptions. It really brought the planet to life and made me feel in the middle of the action.

[danceswithgary]

Great team adventure! :-D