Action/Adventure, Week 1: Call me Sheppard

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Title: Call me Sheppard
Author: kriadydragon
Genre: Action/Adventure
Prompt: Rivers, oceans or waterways
Word Count: 8600
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Summary: "They were enduring a cliché, a practical real-life remake of jaws, complete with grizzled old sea veteran with a shark fetish. Except it wasn't a shark they were after."
Notes: Beta'd by the awesome wildcat88.

Comments

[explodedpen]

Brilliant fun :D Loved John's new friend and how Cap warmed up to Rodney in the end - even if Rodney wasn't so thrilled himself!

[explodedpen]

Forgot to add:

Loved the artwork!

[astridv]

That was fun, great adventure fic. :)

[coolbreeze1]

Loved the worldbuilding in this! Cap's voice was great, and I loved how he first taunted Rodney, then became his buddy. The fight with robot squid was fun and intense. A great read all around!

[titan5]

AWESOME!! The descriptions of the world and the ceomites were great and gave me a nice mental picture to work with. Loved the ceomites by the way. Cap was a great character and I particularly enjoyed him and Rodney insulting each other. Very creative and entertaining story - loved it from beginning to end!!!

[tridget]

This was a fun read. I enjoyed the setting for the adventure and the ceomites. Good intensity to the climax of the tale. Very enjoyable.

ETA - Loved the artwork, too. So perfect for this adventure.