Action/Adventure, Week 1: Call me Sheppard

Jun 17, 2011 14:05

Title: Call me Sheppard
Author: kriadydragon
Genre: Action/Adventure
Prompt: Rivers, oceans or waterways
Word Count: 8600
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Summary: "They were enduring a cliché, a practical real-life remake of jaws, complete with grizzled old sea veteran with a shark fetish. Except it wasn't a shark they were after."
Notes: Beta'd by the awesome wildcat88.


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brasslizard June 18 2011, 00:48:20 UTC
Heee. John and Rodney both made new friends. Great adventure tale; very classic. Love the artwork, too.

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skinscript June 18 2011, 02:26:51 UTC
Well done! I like how they slowly figure it out, and how John manages to figure out how the robot is being attracted to its targets.

(aside - there's an author comment embedded that I think was accidentally left in; "****(break here in case the story is too long)****")

Good job.

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gaffsie June 18 2011, 11:55:18 UTC
I really liked this! Rodney's new friend in particular; I'd happily read a whole novel about the adventures of Boatmaster Suvvle and his trusty side-kick Softy McKay. ;)

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acari June 18 2011, 13:09:55 UTC
That was so much fun. I loved the characterisation and descriptions. It really brought the planet to life and made me feel in the middle of the action.

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danceswithgary June 18 2011, 16:26:11 UTC
Great team adventure! :-D

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