Voyeurism Challenge:Mutual of Atlantis' Wild Kingdom by Brindel

May 14, 2005 21:11


Title: Mutual of Atlantis' Wild Kingdom
Author: Brindel
Rating: G
Category: gen
Spoilers: None
Summary: John watches all his geeks.

Notes: Written lickity-spilt for the sga_flashfic ‘voyeurism’ challenge 'cause I double-dog dared myself to. Unbetaed due to cowardice.

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challenge: voyeurism, author: brindel

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kyrdwyn May 15 2005, 02:21:01 UTC
bwahahaha!

He suddenly had the feeling he study of the 'Behavior Of the Feral Geek in his Natural Habitat" was about to become one of his new favorite pastimes

Wonder if John could do a doctoral thesis on that......

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akire_yta May 15 2005, 02:23:31 UTC
now there's an idea for a sequel if ever i saw one!

*pictures Shep as the Geek Hunter*

Crickey! Here's a frisky little fella. Now I'm gonna sneak up on him and try to shove this chocolate bar down his throat....

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kyrdwyn May 15 2005, 02:29:32 UTC
"Gotta watch out what kind of bait you leave for this fella, if he detects citrus, he'll not only avoid it, but turn on you with his deadly snark reflex..."

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brindel May 15 2005, 02:32:29 UTC
*spfhtt!* *coughsnickercough* Ack!
Note to self: Do not read comments and eat pizza at the same time. Durn near choked to death!

Steve Erwin after a Wraith. THAT would be a Animal Planet Special I'd pay to see...

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aclarar May 15 2005, 02:51:52 UTC
Behavior Of the Feral Geek in his Natural Habitat??? Yep, that sound just like the title of my pregrade thesis.

Very funny story, thanks.

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coreopsis May 15 2005, 03:22:27 UTC
Very funny fic. But why is the text so small? I had to control + three times just to be able read it. Perhaps the problem is with my eyes. heh.

My favorite bit:
partial differential equation on sub-space quantum mechanics that was cheekily masquerading as graffiti
Hee!

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coreopsis May 15 2005, 03:23:33 UTC
okay, that's weird. Strike the part about the text. Now it's the same as the header.

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brindel May 15 2005, 03:34:36 UTC
No, there IS something off about the text. Not sure what I did wrong though. Everything looked fine in preview...
I apologize if it makes it hard to read. I promise to do better on my next attempted post.
(FYI: This was my first fic EVER. Never written *anything* before on any group, not even just for fun for myself. Didn't mention it up top, because I didn't want to sound all "Oooh, be nice to me, I don't know what I'm doing.")
...Even though that's completely true....

So I'm all just giddy right now that people didn't -HATE- it *and* people actually posted nice comments. (Muppet-dances gleefully in her chair)

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coreopsis May 15 2005, 18:03:45 UTC
Wow! Not many people can pull off decent fanfic on their first go. You should post more. :)

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teaphile May 15 2005, 03:26:28 UTC
Ha! Excellent. (Says she who literally cannot pick up a piece of paper from anywhere in the house without finding an equation or a topological diagram on it.)

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scrollgirl May 15 2005, 03:34:57 UTC
John replied with a smirk as he gestured to the...huh, partial differential equation on sub-space quantum mechanics that was cheekily masquerading as graffiti.

Closet geek! Closet geek! *happysigh* I love John's brain.

Thanks for sharing this! Very cute :)

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