Voyeurism Challenge:Mutual of Atlantis' Wild Kingdom by Brindel

[brindel]

Title: Mutual of Atlantis' Wild Kingdom
Author: Brindel
Rating: G
Category: gen
Spoilers: None
Summary: John watches all his geeks.

Notes: Written lickity-spilt for the sga_flashfic ‘voyeurism’ challenge 'cause I double-dog dared myself to. Unbetaed due to cowardice.

Comments

[grey_bard]

It rang very true, right down to the Alpha Geek growling and snarling to herd his wandering pack. Equations! Equations everywhere!

[zortified]

Heee! Love it.

violently gesturing with one hand as if to be very stern with himself or he'd try to argue himself out of whatever it was he was arguing with himself about.

My fav bit. :-)

[cetpar]

Hee, hee....Very cute. *big smile on face*
And I agree with akire_yta above. You should definitely write about further adventures of Geek Hunter and his observations of the feral geek.

[cetpar]

And it was your first fic EVER? Great job, and welcome, and I hope it's just your first of many.

[brindel]

Thanks, I'm just so relieved that it doesn't totally *stink* I feel wreckless enough to want to give it a try...

(Watches in mute horror as her newly inflated ego clog-dances merrily over her abiding sense of incompetence - Write a second story? That keeps going with this one? Sure! No problem! It's not like I agonized over the decision to write the first one for about a MONTH...)

[brindel]

Clarification: I agonized about writing ANYTHING AT ALL for about a month. I wrote this guy from a completely blank page about...what? 4 hours ago now? *hee*
That little fit of inspiration/despiration/whimsy/why-the-heck-notness may not never, ever, EVER happen again.
But I can hope. *G*

[maraceles]

I really liked this. *g*

[reginagiraffe]

This was wonderful!

I love that John (being the non-dumb math guy that he is) could recognize what the equation was.