The Crownless Again Shall Be King by Blue

[bluestarmuse]

Title: The Crownless Again Shall Be King
Author: bluestarmuse
Challenge: 38 Minutes
Rating: PG
Category: Implied Slash, McKay/Sheppard
Disclaimer: Don't own them [damnit!], just borrowing.
Summary: Teyla sees and watches

Comments

[coreopsis]

That's really sweet. :-)

[bluestarmuse]

Who knew I could do sweet, eh? Thanks! +grins+

[fenris_wolf0]

I am in typo-catching mode, so her we go:

the recently awaken Major - I think should be 'awakened'

much to McKay’s pleasant surprise - 'pleased', right?

While reading definitely has it’s place - should be 'its' place

Hope that helps! :)

[fenris_wolf0]

And see, see I make them too: so her we go where I meant 'here' of course! Hah. :D

[bluestarmuse]

Heh! ^_^

[fenris_wolf0]

Pride goes before a fall! :D

No, seriously, I am terrible at typos myself... I constantly make them, I mean. :(

[indybrat]

That's so sweet. I love hearing Teyla's POV about the boys, and that after everything she's seen with the Wraith she can still feel hope. lovely!

[bluestarmuse]

Thank you so very much. +beams+

Yes, hope is a great thing to have and I have a feeling she'll try her hardest to keep it.

[kalikahuntress]

Beautiful fic, that is both hopeful and a little sad which makes it perfect that its told from Teyla's point of view. And I love the parallels to LOTR, its something I never thought of before but it makes so much sense. Thanks for the lovely story.

[bluestarmuse]

You're welcome!

I've always been a big LOTR fan [see my username? Yeah, that my real first & middle name], so adding it to SGA was easy breezy. +grins+

[wickedwords]

Lovely! I like getting an outsider's view of a relationship at times, and it's nice to have that without the pain of exclusion that often goes with it. She's still a friend and a member of the team, and I really liked seeing that.

[bluestarmuse]

Thank muchly! +grins+