Bounded in a Nutshell by Purna (Not Happening Challenge)

Apr 14, 2006 15:15

Bounded in a Nutshell by purna
McKay/Sheppard
~8,000 words
NC17
Summary: The answers to everything are in a room in Atlantis.
A/N: Beta thanks to lamardeuse, who made me stop and think. Thank her for the ending.

Bounded in a Nutshell )

challenge: not happening, author: purna

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kickthebeat April 14 2006, 21:19:59 UTC
oh, the homotp. how lovely! there are so many reasons why you are one of my favourites. :x

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purna April 14 2006, 21:37:51 UTC
Hey, thanks! Glad you liked it. And, wow, you'll make me blush. :)

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amothea April 14 2006, 21:28:19 UTC
I loved this story.

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purna April 14 2006, 21:38:17 UTC
Thanks!

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jargonelle April 14 2006, 21:54:47 UTC
This was brilliant!

"Whatever your passion might be, for Rodney it is a problem that bends to his will, the chance to learn, to stretch his intellect. The neural room -- to be utterly immersed in that moment when everything makes sense, when the puzzle almost solves itself..." Zelenka trailed off, staring dreamily into space. - That line is going to stay with me, it's haunting and beautiful. I love Zelenka in this.

It was a serious turn on, the feeling of being in synch with Rodney again, and he licked his lips. - *grins*

A great plot, a great ending and it was hot too, what more could anyone want?

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purna April 14 2006, 22:36:54 UTC
Heh, I adore Zelenka, so I'm glad you liked him here.

I'm so happy this worked for you!

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purna April 14 2006, 22:40:46 UTC
It was interesting writing John and Rodney (and Zelenka, for that matter) here, because it really is a shift in gears to go from one to the other.

And John strikes me as someone who's smart, but not someone who could get lost in in his own head, as I see Rodney easily doing.

Anyway, thanks!

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springwoof April 14 2006, 22:10:01 UTC
wow. yes. the neural room would be like heaven for Rodney, and it would be like hell to lose it. excellent concept, wonderful execution.

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purna April 14 2006, 22:42:55 UTC
Hey, thanks! I'm glad the concept worked for you.

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