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Dec 18, 2006 07:26

Title: Hostage part 2 ( Read more... )

Comments 7

karanina December 18 2006, 23:02:06 UTC

Woah! He's definately not the cuddly Jayne from so many other fics. Which is good, in that you've captured his crudeness well.

anonymous December 19 2006, 00:41:48 UTC

"Whoa now, girl. That's just plain dirty!" But I like it! Definately a new and entertaining take on Jayne and River. Can't wait for part 3!

ladyofthdragon December 19 2006, 03:26:52 UTC

damn... that was one of the best lemons i have ever read... and my love starved behind has read a lot of lemons! i loved it! very good, i cannot wait to see what you do with part three, is that going to be our christmas presant?

im_a_leaf December 19 2006, 20:15:30 UTC

You are back! *glee* SMUT! Santa did get my letter!

talona December 20 2006, 04:01:36 UTC

I like this take of Jayne and River. Can't wait to read more!