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malugargula March 30 2015, 04:40:28 UTC
Poor Chloe... She's so sad about Lex (I still hope he's not the real bad guy here lol)

And I just loved the Chlollie talking and kissing in the end
This date is gonna be awesome :)

Tks for sharing

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serafina19 April 1 2015, 04:57:48 UTC
Things are... complicated. That's all I can say, because I have a few twists up my sleeve.

I figured it was time to address their relationship. Glad you enjoyed. Date night is next :)

Thanks for this!

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scout09 March 31 2015, 18:04:53 UTC
Awwwwwwww x 1000. As I told you on Twitter, I was grinning like an idiot at the end of this. I love that as great as you are with the angst, your writing has just as much emotional punch when you channel that into the happy.

“The shoe’s fun on the other foot isn’t it?” Really enjoying Evie's glee at being able to turn the tables on her friends' non-relationship relationship. She's never going to be super pushy (as she said, there's Lois for that), so it comes across as mainly being happy for her friends. It's one of the reasons I love her character. Her taking the opportunity to throw "think about it" back at Chloe was great ( ... )

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serafina19 April 1 2015, 05:11:06 UTC
And again, thank you for your wonderful feedback! The happy should continue in the next chapter with the date night. This story required a lot of set-up, so there was less focus on the Chloe/Oliver relationship in the last few parts. That said, their relationship is a big part of the next two chapters. After that, well, I'm glad you like my angst ( ... )

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kachica April 1 2015, 11:27:51 UTC
great update and enjoyed especially the chlollie bit.

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serafina19 April 9 2015, 04:23:17 UTC
I'm glad to hear that! Thanks for the feedback Keiko :)

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