Line of Trust - Tora/Saga - 3/6 + epilogue

[sentimentalenvy]

Title: Line of Trust
Chapter(s): 3/6 + epilogue
Author: sentimentalenvy
Genre: AU/Romance/little angst?
Rating: PG-13 - R
Warnings: language
Pairing/Characters: Tora/Saga, Shou/Hiroto, Shou/Saga, Tora/Nao (one sided).
Synopsis: Saga is thrilled when Tora accepts his feelings, and he is even more ecstatic to know that Tora is slowly building up the courage to

Comments

[rainbow_legends]

*gasps* A new chapterrrrr! Yayyyyyy! 8DDDD
*goes off to read*

My....my heart just automatically stopped when Tora said to Saga that...
“You said you loved me.”

“I do - ”

“Bullshit.”

Shit. Oh shit, pleaseee. The drama is too much to takeeee! You gotta update this soonnnnn! D8

Oh, and “You’re almost 30 for god sake go get some man! Demand that fucking tiger to SHOVE IT!” -- I LOL'D SO EFFING HARD. >XDDDD Hiroto can give the most lol-able (is that even a word? XD) comments at the wrong time. 8DDD

I loveeee it. Oh pleaseeee. You gotta end the denial part of Tora. I know he loves Saga. He's just....gonna stop denying it. DX *feels miserable*

[sentimentalenvy]

rofl I knoww teh drama teh drama @o@!
I can read your comment over and over again and go lol o:
Haha I was literally trembling when I was writing this so I was like what the hell why not make Saga tremble as well ._. *and I was cold too o:*

Ahaha I don't know what happened but Hiroto turned out this way in this story haha XD!

Of course he does o:! Denial is a bitch but it's perfect for conflicts in stories XD Don't feel miserable D8!

[rainbow_legends]

Darn it. =A= But hey! Amazing drama such as these is amazing. And by the fact that you wrote it so beautifully, it really made my heart flutter and have this crazy feeling like it's going to burst anytime soon. 8D

Ehhh? Reallyyyy? XDDDD
I just hope that Saga's heart won't die because of too much pain that Tora had caused him. ;w;

Hiroto made the story more spicy and hot. XDDD I like it. 8DDD

You really did a great job! *salutes* Please update this soon, sweetie! (>w<)

[sentimentalenvy]

Indeed \@_@/! Haha I'm wondering how I'm gonna write Tora's POV @_@;. I'm sure it'll turn out just fine o:. Yeah I figured it was about time I mean a person can only take this kind of shit for so long O_O. Haha yeah Hiroto...apparently love makes joo too crazy fuxxed up things o___o.

[yellow_shuffle]

oh my god!.. the drama! the anxiety.. the fact that this is my first time to comment here! XDD

*hugs* thanks you for updating and not studying... keep it up

Gawd~ im such a bad influence! XD

anyway... love it~

[sentimentalenvy]

ahaha orly o:! Yey welcome to the story then o:!
LOL oh it's alright XD I don't mind
It's not like the hw is hardcore hard ._.

thank you XP ~

[hotlikerobots]

BEND OVER. .__.Bend over so I can sexxx you like, right nowww. 8DDD

[sentimentalenvy]

O_O oh noes o: *bends ovar*

Rofl meanie sexy XD?! That makes Tora's sexual radiance all the more appealing 8D. I mean I honestly don't think people can be that oblivious -_-;. *bricks him in the head*

I'm glad to hear it >_< /. You've looked a lot deeper into it and you've got the gist of it. Wow that just makes me realize how predictable my stories are rofl oh noes XD! Well then again I hope it's going towards a direction towards the readers' liking? I don't have the heart to make Tora a selfish cold bastard x_x. You're not crossing the line at all lol XP ~!

I unno @_@ I mean I think I should let people know what's goin' on in Tora's mind in the next chapter cause I've hardly scratched the surface of this fic. It's most likely not even gonna be 6 chapters 0_0 cause this morning I just had a spontaneous rush of ideas like more shit is gonna happen o_o;. I'll try to continue with the suspense and intensity of this plot o_o; Things can't be resolved that easily hur hur XD.
Wee babbles are great fanks XP

[beyondtheremix]

STICK IT TO THE MAN SAGA!!!! DX
Seriously.

You updated and it was lovely long<33333

I'm glad you're going to give Tora a little splain' bit next chapter because wtf is wrong with him =___= he must be soooo messed up.
And Hiroto must be really messed up too because I can't tell if he cut him self on purpose or if it was an accident >_> he's 17 and has his own home?..?

Well~ the first part made me laugh though XD Pon's perspective is hilarious<3 And Saga.. "The whole backside of Saga’s hand was stinging and burning with raw stingy pain" ROFL XDDDDDD that made me laugh at the pinnacle point of seriousness XDDDDDD hahhahahaha Don't be a pansy Saga! You can man up to your problems!!!

Anyways~~~
THANK YOU VERY MUCH! XD and I look forward to the future~

[sentimentalenvy]

lmao yayuh D8! Go Saga go o: !

Omg you have no idea D; ...
Even if it doesn't look like it...I've spent like...days on this chapter haha 8D!

Yeah I knoow Tora's not that much of a jackass I swear D8! Lmao Hiroto did it on purpose D:! That's why he said he wasn't fond of doing stupid things but I guess that's what he did to make Shou stay with him. If I were him I would've like... uh faked a stomach ache. If that didn't work let's settle for lunging and grabbing a hold of Shou's legs XD. Oh nuu he doesn't live alone o:! His family is out or something o_o;.

Lmao omg yeah you know what I was kind of giggly while typing that ROFL. I kind of phail at being serious lol XD I don't wanna make him too much of a pansy but then I've often wondered about how he would react if Tora punched him. Would he punch back? Prolly D: Or beat him with his bass D8.

Thanks for teh comment 8D!

[beyondtheremix]

XD No proob thank YOU for writing
I think this story's prettyyyy awesome<3

D8
Hiroto cut himself on purpose....?!?!!!? And it made Shou stay.... this is the start of enabling behavior that'll lead into a spiral of misery!!! SPIRAL OF MISERY!!!! lol or it might not be XD I pretty much fail at being serious too~