Line of Trust - Tora/Saga - 3/6 + epilogue

[sentimentalenvy]

Title: Line of Trust
Chapter(s): 3/6 + epilogue
Author: sentimentalenvy
Genre: AU/Romance/little angst?
Rating: PG-13 - R
Warnings: language
Pairing/Characters: Tora/Saga, Shou/Hiroto, Shou/Saga, Tora/Nao (one sided).
Synopsis: Saga is thrilled when Tora accepts his feelings, and he is even more ecstatic to know that Tora is slowly building up the courage to

Comments

[sentimentalenvy]

O____O!

Ahh I know I know >_< !
I'm glad to hear that T_T! >_< !!
Thank youu \@_@/~!

[kapike]

I love Hiroto! Cutting himself! It sounds like something I'd do also. Of cause by mistake. I wonder if Shou will realize or not since he only has eyes for Saga even though he knows that Saga is taken.

Woah! the scene between Saga and Tora was pretty intense. Although I can understand how Saga would feel with Tora still going out with girls and stuff. He doesn't seem to care about liking Saga back at all.

Can't wait for the new chapter to see the view from Tora's eyes!

[sentimentalenvy]

Lawl love him for cutting himself D8!?!?! Aah the word cutting in general makes me shudder >_< . Eventually Shou will cause I didn't make them a pairing for nothing o: ~ will be a rough journey for Hiroto but he can doo it o:! And technically, Saga isn't taken o: ...

Yeah I figured if I was him I would've smacked him a million times by now D: But Tora does have a side of the story o:! lol

thanks for teh comment o: ~

[kapike]

Wow. That sounded wrong. I don't love Hiroto for cutting himself. I guess I should have worded it like this..

I love Hiroto in this story. So cute. Ouch for cutting himself! etc, etc, etc...

[pulse_wriggles]

That was a fucking amazing chapter. I'm so proud of Saga standing up for himself!! Finally! LOL. Thank you for the update! It made my night! I can't wait for the Tora-point-of-view!

[sentimentalenvy]

I'm glad o:!! Haha me too XP After a million years of suffering, he's explodes like a mini time bomb o_o; Thanks for your comment T___T~!!

[rechino_reno]

Tora and his womanizing schemes. glad Saga can stand up on his own feet this time *proud*
gosh! this chap really so intense and I cannot wait for the next chaps *excited*

[sentimentalenvy]

I knoow D8 Lol everyone's proud of Saga this time o:
Thanks so much ;o;~ Lol

[silyria]

Wow...
This chapter ir really very very emotional.. maybe because I was emotional myself when I was reading it.... who knows xD

Now I totally don't understand Tora xD But I hope next update will clarify some things.... ^^

I like they way you describe main characters, how are they felling and what are they talking. In my opinion it's not very easy to join action with dialogs and description.

Thank you!

[sentimentalenvy]

I love your comments because you always tell me how you feel about the chapters XP Lol everyone's supposed to be wtf with Tora for now xD;. Thank youu >_< ! Sorry for the super late response x_x;.