Citadel - Daikogen pg.2

[sempaimiles]

Originally published at RKdia Comics. You can comment here or there.

I got a mixed bag of praise and criticism for the layout of this page. I guess from a purely visual standpoint it can be hard to tell where to go, but that’s why I let the text do it’s job and lead the readers eye to the next landmark. I hope it was successful enough.

Ink on

Comments

[poisonflowers]

Text in the middle panel is hard to read where it shifts from white to black. Is "re deemed" a typo or one word split over two lines?

[sempaimiles]

Probably...I'm pretty sure this was fixed in the last version I printed...but I'm working with older files here for some reason. D'oh!