Comments | selkie_queen: In the Night

selkie_queen

In the Night

Aug 22, 2010 13:00

( In the Night )

original fiction, monster

Comments 5

Your BF edit, pt. 1 keppiehed August 23 2010, 19:13:48 UTC

Hello! I'm your editor this week ( ... )

Your BF edit! pt. 2 keppiehed August 23 2010, 19:14:55 UTC

-"Damn it[,] Deborah ( ... )

Your BF edit! pt. 3 *WHEW* keppiehed August 23 2010, 19:15:34 UTC

-"I'm not scared of you," Katie said while the rain began to pound the roof[,] and the eyes blinked ( ... )

katden August 25 2010, 00:09:20 UTC

What's the MONSTER?! :D As usual,you've created something very entertaining.

Editor Number 2! writteninsight October 12 2010, 23:03:25 UTC

Ok, it looks like Keppie did a great job with commas and sentence structure, so I'll find something else to focus on so I'm not being repetitive ( ... )