The Darkest Song of Starlight (Sam/Lucifer)

Feb 23, 2011 05:55

Title: The Darkest Song of Starlight
Author: secondplatypus
Pairing: Sam/Lucifer
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: pwp, wing kink, toppy!Sam, devious-subby-tempting-corrupting-manipulative!Lucifer, rough sex, a little voice-play, a smidgeon of language and a somewhat dark ending.
Could be read as dub-con, but wasn't written with that intention.
Spoilers: none
Word Count: ( Read more... )

kink: first time, pairing: sam/lucifer, rating: nc-17, fanfiction, supernatural, kink: top!sam, kink: wings, kink: voice play, kink: bottom!lucifer, genre: pwp, kink: rough sex

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sarahlizzie February 23 2011, 14:12:07 UTC
Heee ^^ Sam has such a power kink. XD
Absolutely perfect, as usual, dear. x

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secondplatypus March 1 2011, 12:57:07 UTC
and I loooooove playing to that power kink. I love it so, so much.
Thank you, love
*smishes*

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highermagic February 23 2011, 14:45:41 UTC
Oh Jebuz. *happy dancing*
I love the whole Lucifer's-still-playing-you-boy aspect of this. So delicious - you write Sam/Lucifer so well, from all angles, and I love it.
Bravo (:

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secondplatypus March 1 2011, 13:00:13 UTC
Thank you so much, darling - I wanted to try a new flavor of Sam/Lucifer in this fic, and I wasn't sure how it would go over. It's so good to hear that this worked for you.

This is really the only oneshot scenario where I can see Lucifer bottoming for Sam.
The problem with this pairing is that it takes so much establishment and explanation to make it convincing - maybe I'll try taking on a longer bottom!Luci project someday.

For now, my brain still operates primarily in 1-3000 word pieces of fic, and refuses to go longer.

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orbiting_saturn February 23 2011, 15:27:17 UTC
ohmygod. I sort of can't believe how much I enjoyed that. I mean, I kind of loved that. Sam/Lucifer and wing!kink are way up on the list of things I don't like, but this...well, this was just very affecting. I really liked the way you dealt with the emergence of Lucifer's wings, the descriptions of them were artful and brutal. And holy geez, the manipulation, Lucifer playing Sam's lust for power was so right.

I actually feel like I'm betraying myself by loving this so hard. But, oh well. A girl wants what a girl wants. Am I right? Very, very nicely done, sweetheart.

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secondplatypus March 1 2011, 13:04:02 UTC
Gaaaaah, you've got me all flaily and bouncy!
Positive feedback is always nice to hear from people who ship the pairings and kinks in a fic, but when someone who doesn't usually go for the content likes something, the compliment multiplies tenfold.

The brutality and manipulation and power dynamics (not to mention the challenge of portraying the Devil) are one of the reasons why I love to write this pairing. It's such delicious, gleefully wrong fun.

And as far as a girl wanting what a girl wants, you're absolutely right, my love.
*looks around shiftily before sneaking off to bury herself in the wincest archives*

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falling_dominos February 23 2011, 16:22:48 UTC
Oh You just make me so happy.

-will beg for fic at some point- I'll beg amor_remanet for dark!fic and you for -anything- angelic.

I love this, not as much as Perish Twice...but I do love this. (I hope you realize that when I tell people about Luci/Sam I send them here. You know. Just thought I'd let you know.) It's so win. Just the wings and the petting, and the omg-want-need-now!Sam (which I felt was actually very in-character...-uh oh- My slightly off norm ships are starting to read as canon to me...lmao) and the image of Lucifer on his knees. -nods- I think I liked that acutally as much as the wings. It was...strange and delicious and filled with manipulative glee.

In retrospect, I may not agree with sub!Luci...but he's really not here. He's just pretending so he can get what he want. The line 'I can be what you need, Sam. I am everything you will ever need.' Ran through my head just now...UNF woman! You always make my wing-kink act up on me. Lol <333333333 I love you forever.

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amor_remanet February 26 2011, 08:32:19 UTC
There's going to be some good old fashioned angst/dark fic out of my corner sometime soon, actually! 2014ish!Sam/Cas, Claire/Emily (Lilith's little girl vessel from "No Rest For the Wicked" and "Yellow Fever"), and a fic that Meggy would do a lot of things to get from me, but that I'm not going into specifics on for fear of jinxing its chances of success.

...and some not-quite-so-dark-and-angsty fic that's for people who won my writing at the Purple Dove.

...and I know you bid on me but didn't win, BUT OH HEY, YOU HAVE A BIRTHDAY COMING UP SOON. IF YOU DON'T MIND IT BEING KIND OF LATE, WHAT WOULD YOU HYPOTHETICALLY LOVE TO GET FROM ME FOR SAID BIRTHDAY? >_>

Also - isn't Meggy's Lucifer deliciously like Jareth from Labyrinth in this fic? I really like your reading of him as pretending to be submissive so he can get what he wants; it just smacks of "I ask for so little. Just fear me, love me, do as I say and I will be your slave."

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falling_dominos February 26 2011, 18:46:24 UTC
I was like....-wants fic, for a good cause, has the money, bids- I went like -.- when I saw I was outbid. Merrrr. Lol.

But what I would hypothetically love from you for said birthday? -ponders- OH OH OH!!! I put up a prompt on the rare character meme...-nods lots- Oki -wibbles happily- It was basically pwp idea with Cross!Dressing!Lolli!Adam(with fishnets and those legs and unf!!!!) and angry!Top!Luci, biting, angry claiming and sexings galore. ^.^

Orrrrrr......something with Ali being a fem!Domme (either human!Au or perhaps just a chick vessel("Cause, Dean...do you really think that your brother's little parlor tricks could really kill me that easily? It hurt more than I have in a long time, but I'm afraid you can't get rid of me that easily, boy.") and Dean not knowing about it til he feels that strange familiarity...no sex per say...but whip play/sense dep/interesting voice play ( ... )

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secondplatypus March 1 2011, 13:10:28 UTC
Also - isn't Meggy's Lucifer deliciously like Jareth from Labyrinth in this fic? I really like your reading of him as pretending to be submissive so he can get what he wants; it just smacks of "I ask for so little. Just fear me, love me, do as I say and I will be your slave."

FFFFFFFFF
*is nearly crushed under the weight of the flattery*

So, biffles. Have I told you lately that I love you?
Even though I'm sure I have, I LOVE YOU!

also, re the fic I would do a lot of things to get from you: I'm not very bendy, what with all the muscle mass, but I can learrrrrrrn. :D

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aeon_entwined February 23 2011, 17:38:38 UTC
*glees so hard and rolls in it forever*

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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secondplatypus March 1 2011, 13:11:44 UTC
*flops down next to you and shares in the roll-fest*
This is all for you, darling. I'm glad you like it.
You need to give me Sam/Lucifer prompts more often, I haven't spent nearly enough time with these two.

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