Fic: The Sun Rises (PG)

[baphrosia]

Title: The Sun Rises
Words: ~500
Rating: PG
Setting: Post-series
A/N: *Waves*  For those of you who don't recognize the username, I used to be spuffy_luvr.  I finally quit complaining about how lame my username was and changed it.
Warnings: I tried to write the happy and the fluffy, but my brain said NO!!! (It was very emphatic.) This story

Comments

[feliciacraft]

I appreciated that nonwarning warning because naturally I'd prepared for the worst, so the sting wasn't as bad as it could've been. That was delicate and sensitive and so very real. Thank you for sharing.

[baphrosia]

Ah, yes, then non-warning warning is my favorite kind. Enough to prepare, but not to spoil.

Thank you!

[baphrosia]

Thank you so much!

[enigmaticblues]

Oh, God, this hurt. It was so beautifully written and so evocative.

[baphrosia]

I never know if I should apologize when people say that. Thank you!!

[shapinglight]

This is so very sad and beautifully written. Kudos.

[baphrosia]

Aw, thank you so much!!!

[pfeifferpack]

GUT wrenching yet beautiful in its own way. This is a brilliant piece, utterly sad and emotional.

*applause*
Kathleen

Just read this to my husband (he's a fan too) and he said it was nearly poetic. I agree.
There are those who can tell a story, those that can tell a story well, then there is this.

[baphrosia]

Aw, that's just... *blushes*. I tend to very dry and minimal in my imagery, so I've been working hard to learn how to incorporate the poetic style that Moonmoth (for example) is so very good at. That makes your hubby's words especially lovely to hear. Tell him thank you, please. :) And thank you to you too!