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Scars Can Run Deep Part 4

Dec 20, 2011 00:25

Title: Scars Can Run Deep
Pairing(s): YeWook, ninja!HenMi
Genre: Romance
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Ryeowook has a scar that he can't seem to heal, maybe the only person who can is the very same person who gave him that scar.
Note: Fic request for kellsung sorry it took soo long and my god i'm sorta sorry it's 30,120 words ( Read more... )

rating: pg, sj: ryeowook, pairing: yewook, sj: sungmin, pairing: henmi, sj: donghae, sj: zhou mi, genre: romance, sj: henry, sj: yesung

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sealegs2414 December 20 2011, 05:27:43 UTC

kellsung

suju4life December 21 2011, 08:59:31 UTC

SEDRXCFTVBGYHUIJRWUV

THIS IS AMZING MARRY ME AND OH TE SMUT IS Absolutely BEAUTIFUL OKAY ;A;

THE PLOT IS JUST WNDERFUL AND SO IS EVERYTHING YEAH IT'S PERFECT OKAY LIKE THE CHARACTERS ARE TOTALLY PERFECTLY DESCRIBED AND REALISTIC AND STUFF IT'S AMAZING YOU'RE AMAZING AND I'M ACTUALLY REALLY GLAD IT WAS SO LONG BECAUSE IF YOU HAD ANY LESS DETAIL THERE WOULD BE A LOT MORE MISSING SO KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND SHIT BECAUSE YOU HAVE TALENT OKAY <3

suju4life December 21 2011, 09:00:51 UTC

lmao i sound like a hoar OTL but srsly it's really good~! :D <3

sealegs2414 December 21 2011, 14:17:04 UTC

Wow, I wasn't expecting to get this sort of praise for the fic but I thank you so very much ^^ Yeah, I was writing and haha they just wouldn't quit so it ended up being really really long. I was tempted to go into when Yesung tells Jong Jin the truth or heh when Jong Jin finally really realizes it but that would have taken forever so I left it out. >< the smut is absolutely beautiful, i think that's an overstatement but I'm really glad that you think so ^^
<333

suju4life December 21 2011, 16:39:38 UTC

You're so very welcome, and to be honest, i wouldn't be a bit upset if you did add more to this! You've left me quite curious to what the rest of their lives have in store for them...

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allethia December 24 2011, 13:36:32 UTC

omg, took me whole 2 days to read this.. awesome series. *^^*
unnie, is there going to be a sequel for Henmi? :)

sealegs2414 December 24 2011, 19:34:20 UTC

I'm glad you kept reading even though it took you so long to finish. Um I actually didn't think about a Jenkins sequel I thought more along the lines of Jong Jin learning the truth but idk if say 5 ppl want HenMi sequel I'll write one.

sealegs2414 December 24 2011, 22:43:13 UTC

>< stupid autocorrect on my phone. I meant to say HenMi sequel hahahaa not jenkins.

allethia December 25 2011, 04:31:17 UTC

oh, a sequel about that part would be nice too!
okay, i'll be waiting... if there will be sequels :)

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kellsung March 1 2012, 19:33:08 UTC

i'm here! i'm here i'm here, just like i promised! i'm sorry i took ages to leave a comment but i wanted to do it properly, like, you know, reread the whole thing and express my feelings in more than like 3 lines lol. because i don't like leaving half-assed comments, and certainly not on the fics i requested! and since i was writing that monster fic that devoured 3 months of my life (check it out when you have some free time!), i wanted to finish it first, before embarking on this little opinion essay lmao ( ... )

kellsung March 1 2012, 19:34:11 UTC

HARRRUMPH LJ SAID IT WAS TOO LONG SO I CUT IT IN TWO! HERE'S THE REST OF MY COMMENT LMAO

“I’ll forgive you, if you tell me why you have turtle sticky notes in your room and my pictures and you have to buy me a giraffe.”

LMAO DIES SO HARD A GIRAFFE FFFFFFT :'DDDD i mean omg, that was... unexpected. totally took me by surprise. but it's so ryeowook omg, that little cutiepie<333

leather jacket and low cut white shirt that actually showed off a nice portion of his chest, with the tossled hair that completed the look.

okay you totally got me with this one. LEATHER JACKET UNFFFFFFF. AND A LOW CUT SHIRT SHOWING THE CHEST OMG LET ME JUST DROOL ALL OVER THAT IMAGE :Q__________

He leaned in towards Ryeowook’s ear. “I’d kiss you right now but I need to go back to work.”okay this is where i was really sexually frustrated lmao. i mean, that image was so hot, so fricking hot, and jongwoon with the confidence that i love so much in him, and the way he just leand in and said what he said omg idk but i consider it uber hot. he should have kissed ( ... )

sealegs2414 March 3 2012, 13:19:02 UTC

so its a tad annoying replying on my phone but i couldn't wait lol. THAT WAS THE LONGEST COMMENT I'VE EVER GOTTEN BEFORE. holy crap woman that was long! I don't even know where to begin. I'm really glad that you enjoyed the fic it was fun to write. actually reading your comment made me remember a lot of parts I forgot about. like the nine foot pole hehe I do like that line. Omg how embarrassing reading the smut part, I'm walking through a store and cringing and blushing at reading that. sheesh woman. as for your link I had absolutely no idea so woot woot for that. of course I'll be reading the fic that took you forever to finish and comment on your request =p Haha no no I was planning on reading it anyways.

kellsung March 4 2012, 18:26:22 UTC

haha it's just that i like leaving comments that consist of more than like 2 lines. because idk, if i like sth, and when it's super long, how can i sum up my feelings about it just in a few lines? "it's so cute dhfjvkkg. i really liked it! thanks for sharing. ' doesnt seem enough to me lmao.

and once again, yay fo you nailing my kink! :"D

lmao that monster fic of mine boils down to over 35k of porn. but if you feel youre up to it, i cant be happier lol <333

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anonsqueeze March 24 2012, 17:26:11 UTC

OMG
I loved the story sooo much!
The frendship between Ryeowook and Henry ashjvbkhasnvjksn I almost wanted Henry to have a secret crush on him. It was so cute I just wanna squish them!
Ryeowook's grudge did seem silly compared to what was Yesung going through but the torture and nightmares are no joke tho.
Oh God, //the sex scene//. Just damn, Ryeowook was really sexy to me how he took the initiative.

sealegs2414 March 26 2012, 17:17:54 UTC

I"m really glad that you liked it!! I did really like the HenWook friendship and hahaha I almost wanted them to have a relationship at some point because the two of them were just <3 hahahaha I do like some HenWook as well. But yeah, Henry actually did have a bit of a crush on Wook but he denied it to himself because they had such a good friendship and it was brief that he never really revealed that. It was a crush in the past anyways. Hahaha yeah, everyone deals with trauma in different ways and Wook is more sensitive so it was harsher for him. Though when Wook hears of everything that Yesung went through he feels pretty stupid hahaha though he'd never say that. Hehehe I do like an assertive bottom so that's probably partly why Wook took the initiative. A small part anyways, Wook did really want Yesung so yeah. Hahaha I feel like I talked way more than I should have. Thankies thankies thankies for the comment ^^ I love them.

anonsqueeze March 27 2012, 14:23:04 UTC

I knew it! It was impossible for Henry not to! hehehe
I really enjoy good stories like these with some naughty things at the end at least xD
Looking forward to more YeWook :D

sealegs2414 March 31 2012, 12:42:02 UTC

Hehe HenWook is <3 too and before Jongwoon came back there was a small possibility for it to become HenWook ^^ Thankies much. I do actually have a few more YeWook fics and even a HenWook if you like them as well, if you haven't seen them yet. http://sealegs2414.livejournal.com/14047.html#cutid1 that's where you can see my masterlist. Though I think for YeWook, Devour was my best one. Haha anyways those are there if you like as well. ^^

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