Scars Can Run Deep Part 4

[sealegs2414]

Title: Scars Can Run Deep
Pairing(s): YeWook, ninja!HenMi
Genre: Romance
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Ryeowook has a scar that he can't seem to heal, maybe the only person who can is the very same person who gave him that scar.
Note: Fic request for kellsung sorry it took soo long and my god i'm sorta sorry it's 30,120 words

Comments

[kellsung]

i'm here! i'm here i'm here, just like i promised! i'm sorry i took ages to leave a comment but i wanted to do it properly, like, you know, reread the whole thing and express my feelings in more than like 3 lines lol. because i don't like leaving half-assed comments, and certainly not on the fics i requested! and since i was writing that monster fic that devoured 3 months of my life (check it out when you have some free time!), i wanted to finish it first, before embarking on this little opinion essay lmao.

first things first, i need to say that i really like the choice of the topic. i'm keen on school!aus in general and no other pairing suits this theme better than yewook :"D school!aus are usually adorable and light and even though there needs to be some drama and angst somewhere along the way, it's usually not overly tragic after all. and that's good because i don't like it when things are tragic, especially not to the very end. i need happy endings in my life, and yewook do too :"D

lmao, at the beginning i was snorting a little at ryeowook who developed such a strong grudge against jongwoon only because of an unfortunate accident like that. but then i realised that well, human psyche is pretty much impenetrable, and incidents like that, even thoguh they may seem funny after some time, can be a source of serious psychological disorders, nightmares included. and i felt really sorry for ryeowook who couldn't seem to deal with the memory of that unfortunate event and kept having those awful nightmares. at first i couldn't comprehend why it was so difficult for jongwoon to just apologise and have a talk with ryeowook afterwards. but that became clear later into the fic :D

anyway, uhm i love how you wrote into the fic jongwoon's awkwardness and peculiarity - the glasses that he was always wearing upside down, daaaaw, it made it so much more realistic! i could visualise him doing so, he's such a dork :"D also, i love it that he had that part-time job of sorts as a singer in a pub, he's made for singing in dark, smoky places okay :"D and i felt really sorry for him too, he had it tough with no parents and a brother to feed and take care of by himself.

now onto the quotes because they speak for themselves more often than not! :"D

Normally, he didn’t mind being looked at that much because it generally meant a girl fancied him and that he found flattering even though he wouldn’t touch one with a nine foot pole. Not his forte, kissing that one girl who did god knows what with her tongue and too much saliva had been enough for him. Nope, he was set for life.

oh how i like this one! made me giggle so much lmao. like, i actully imagined jongwoon with that nine foot pole in his hand pointing at a girl but still unable to touch her with it lmao. such a nice image XD and omg did that girl rape his mouth with hers omg, thats sounded disgusting (though if it was ryeowook pouring hectoliters of his saliva into jongwoons mouth, it would be super sexy instead lmao/ biased)

That and the fact that she liked to give his butt a squeeze when she thought she was tipsy enough for it to be okay.

OMG WHO WOULDN'T LIKE THAT, WHO WOULDN'T :'DDDDD i have a huge thing for jongwoon's ass and thighs omg (but his front is delectable too, ngl)

Plus I’m attractive enough, by the time we’re finished with this you’ll have wished it was a real kiss.”

FXDFHYGKFHLHL YES PLEASE? omg i love forward jongwoon okay and i love when he's self-confident like this :"D and omg yes just KISS ALREADY!!! /presses their faces together

OH AND OMG THOSE TURTLE STICKY NOTES WITH SWEET MESSAGES FOR RYEOWOOK <333333 i rly like how he started to fall for his secret admirer and then sort of projected all those feelings onto jongwoon, when he found out it was him all along :"D

[kellsung]

HARRRUMPH LJ SAID IT WAS TOO LONG SO I CUT IT IN TWO! HERE'S THE REST OF MY COMMENT LMAO

“I’ll forgive you, if you tell me why you have turtle sticky notes in your room and my pictures and you have to buy me a giraffe.”

LMAO DIES SO HARD A GIRAFFE FFFFFFT :'DDDD i mean omg, that was... unexpected. totally took me by surprise. but it's so ryeowook omg, that little cutiepie<333

leather jacket and low cut white shirt that actually showed off a nice portion of his chest, with the tossled hair that completed the look.

okay you totally got me with this one. LEATHER JACKET UNFFFFFFF. AND A LOW CUT SHIRT SHOWING THE CHEST OMG LET ME JUST DROOL ALL OVER THAT IMAGE :Q__________

He leaned in towards Ryeowook’s ear. “I’d kiss you right now but I need to go back to work.”

okay this is where i was really sexually frustrated lmao. i mean, that image was so hot, so fricking hot, and jongwoon with the confidence that i love so much in him, and the way he just leand in and said what he said omg idk but i consider it uber hot. he should have kissed ryeowook then, should have grabbed him by the nape of his neck and pressed their lips together siiiiiigh. /always greedy

He pulled back, breaking the kiss he had started in favor of grinding against Jong Woon’s pelvis as he moved his lips to his ears. Biting on his ear, he gave it a quick tug and then whispered, breathily next to his ear, “Jong Woon-ah.” Ryeowook swiped his tongue slowly along the side of that very same ear, then continued, “do you want me?”

omg isn't ryeowook gorgeous when he's such a little slut for jongwoon? omg i love that it was him who initiated the fun and that he was so shameless when doing so :"D and basically the seeeeex <33333 oh god why are yewook having sex so hot and sexy and all sorts of beautiful omg :"D thank you for writing the sex scene for meeee <3

After a moment Jong Woon pulled out of Ryeowook even though he had let out a whimper and attempted to keep him inside of him.

OH GOD WOMAN HOW DID YOU KNOW MY KINK GSVDJHBJFKGBKH/ SCREAMS. i mean omg, i love it, sincerely LOVE IT when ryeowook wants jongwoon to stay in him and never pull out ;"D or when jongwoon wants to stay in ryeowook throughout the night and they fall asleep without him pulling out agvdjhsbffkg. it's just so incredibly hot, it's like they're idk, joined together and can't bear to be separated :"D

all in all, i greatly enjoyed the fic! and it was sooooo long too! i'm really grateful to you for writing such a long story for me and devoting so much time to it. thank you so so so soooo much and i'm sorry once again that it took me ages to comment! ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

[sealegs2414]

so its a tad annoying replying on my phone but i couldn't wait lol. THAT WAS THE LONGEST COMMENT I'VE EVER GOTTEN BEFORE. holy crap woman that was long! I don't even know where to begin. I'm really glad that you enjoyed the fic it was fun to write. actually reading your comment made me remember a lot of parts I forgot about. like the nine foot pole hehe I do like that line. Omg how embarrassing reading the smut part, I'm walking through a store and cringing and blushing at reading that. sheesh woman. as for your link I had absolutely no idea so woot woot for that. of course I'll be reading the fic that took you forever to finish and comment on your request =p Haha no no I was planning on reading it anyways.

[kellsung]

haha it's just that i like leaving comments that consist of more than like 2 lines. because idk, if i like sth, and when it's super long, how can i sum up my feelings about it just in a few lines? "it's so cute dhfjvkkg. i really liked it! thanks for sharing. ' doesnt seem enough to me lmao.

and once again, yay fo you nailing my kink! :"D

lmao that monster fic of mine boils down to over 35k of porn. but if you feel youre up to it, i cant be happier lol <333

[sealegs2414]

OMG WOMAN! That's beyond a crazy amount of porn...but I shall read it since I have time to die on spring break hahaha OMG YOUR ICON IS SO ADORABLE! I WANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[kellsung]

lmao i might have exaggerated a little, there are some traces of plot too. SOME.

yay! im glad! when does your spring break start then?

IKRRRR? i love it too, ngl XD

[sealegs2414]

Hahaha SOME, well some is better than none and now I'll be looking for it and amused by just how much or haha little there is =p

Haha i'm a dork saying that like spring break hasn't come yet. I'm on it right now ^^ last day of class was last Friday ^^

They are too precious <3

[sealegs2414]

O.o I somehow hit the post button before I was finished. and now I'm not sure exactly what I was going to say. So, Thankies Thankies for reading, commenting and like the fic. ^^