Scars Can Run Deep Part 4

Dec 20, 2011 00:25

Title: Scars Can Run Deep
Pairing(s): YeWook, ninja!HenMi
Genre: Romance
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Ryeowook has a scar that he can't seem to heal, maybe the only person who can is the very same person who gave him that scar.
Note: Fic request for kellsung sorry it took soo long and my god i'm sorta sorry it's 30,120 words ( Read more... )

rating: pg, sj: ryeowook, pairing: yewook, sj: sungmin, pairing: henmi, sj: donghae, sj: zhou mi, genre: romance, sj: henry, sj: yesung

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kellsung March 1 2012, 19:34:11 UTC
HARRRUMPH LJ SAID IT WAS TOO LONG SO I CUT IT IN TWO! HERE'S THE REST OF MY COMMENT LMAO

“I’ll forgive you, if you tell me why you have turtle sticky notes in your room and my pictures and you have to buy me a giraffe.”

LMAO DIES SO HARD A GIRAFFE FFFFFFT :'DDDD i mean omg, that was... unexpected. totally took me by surprise. but it's so ryeowook omg, that little cutiepie<333

leather jacket and low cut white shirt that actually showed off a nice portion of his chest, with the tossled hair that completed the look.

okay you totally got me with this one. LEATHER JACKET UNFFFFFFF. AND A LOW CUT SHIRT SHOWING THE CHEST OMG LET ME JUST DROOL ALL OVER THAT IMAGE :Q__________

He leaned in towards Ryeowook’s ear. “I’d kiss you right now but I need to go back to work.”

okay this is where i was really sexually frustrated lmao. i mean, that image was so hot, so fricking hot, and jongwoon with the confidence that i love so much in him, and the way he just leand in and said what he said omg idk but i consider it uber hot. he should have kissed ryeowook then, should have grabbed him by the nape of his neck and pressed their lips together siiiiiigh. /always greedy

He pulled back, breaking the kiss he had started in favor of grinding against Jong Woon’s pelvis as he moved his lips to his ears. Biting on his ear, he gave it a quick tug and then whispered, breathily next to his ear, “Jong Woon-ah.” Ryeowook swiped his tongue slowly along the side of that very same ear, then continued, “do you want me?”

omg isn't ryeowook gorgeous when he's such a little slut for jongwoon? omg i love that it was him who initiated the fun and that he was so shameless when doing so :"D and basically the seeeeex <33333 oh god why are yewook having sex so hot and sexy and all sorts of beautiful omg :"D thank you for writing the sex scene for meeee <3

After a moment Jong Woon pulled out of Ryeowook even though he had let out a whimper and attempted to keep him inside of him.

OH GOD WOMAN HOW DID YOU KNOW MY KINK GSVDJHBJFKGBKH/ SCREAMS. i mean omg, i love it, sincerely LOVE IT when ryeowook wants jongwoon to stay in him and never pull out ;"D or when jongwoon wants to stay in ryeowook throughout the night and they fall asleep without him pulling out agvdjhsbffkg. it's just so incredibly hot, it's like they're idk, joined together and can't bear to be separated :"D

all in all, i greatly enjoyed the fic! and it was sooooo long too! i'm really grateful to you for writing such a long story for me and devoting so much time to it. thank you so so so soooo much and i'm sorry once again that it took me ages to comment! ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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sealegs2414 March 3 2012, 13:19:02 UTC
so its a tad annoying replying on my phone but i couldn't wait lol. THAT WAS THE LONGEST COMMENT I'VE EVER GOTTEN BEFORE. holy crap woman that was long! I don't even know where to begin. I'm really glad that you enjoyed the fic it was fun to write. actually reading your comment made me remember a lot of parts I forgot about. like the nine foot pole hehe I do like that line. Omg how embarrassing reading the smut part, I'm walking through a store and cringing and blushing at reading that. sheesh woman. as for your link I had absolutely no idea so woot woot for that. of course I'll be reading the fic that took you forever to finish and comment on your request =p Haha no no I was planning on reading it anyways.

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kellsung March 4 2012, 18:26:22 UTC
haha it's just that i like leaving comments that consist of more than like 2 lines. because idk, if i like sth, and when it's super long, how can i sum up my feelings about it just in a few lines? "it's so cute dhfjvkkg. i really liked it! thanks for sharing. ' doesnt seem enough to me lmao.

and once again, yay fo you nailing my kink! :"D

lmao that monster fic of mine boils down to over 35k of porn. but if you feel youre up to it, i cant be happier lol <333

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sealegs2414 March 5 2012, 15:08:38 UTC
OMG WOMAN! That's beyond a crazy amount of porn...but I shall read it since I have time to die on spring break hahaha OMG YOUR ICON IS SO ADORABLE! I WANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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kellsung March 5 2012, 15:12:28 UTC
lmao i might have exaggerated a little, there are some traces of plot too. SOME.

yay! im glad! when does your spring break start then?

IKRRRR? i love it too, ngl XD

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sealegs2414 March 5 2012, 16:05:00 UTC
Hahaha SOME, well some is better than none and now I'll be looking for it and amused by just how much or haha little there is =p

Haha i'm a dork saying that like spring break hasn't come yet. I'm on it right now ^^ last day of class was last Friday ^^

They are too precious <3

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sealegs2414 March 3 2012, 13:22:31 UTC
O.o I somehow hit the post button before I was finished. and now I'm not sure exactly what I was going to say. So, Thankies Thankies for reading, commenting and like the fic. ^^

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