Because Yuffie doesn't write poetry!

[scratchmist]

Character poetry, after which I shall go off and attempt to write original fic. Possibly crosspossting to Yuffentine, maybe tomorrow; the word because has since poisoned my brain, I can't stop using it. Unnnggh.

Comments

[mythicbeast]

I like it. D: Although having it in this format (stopping abruptly, and the like) does give me headaches, since it's almost-prose. I actually like the last bit, though.

I keep thinking that for all the times Yuffie uses because, the poem should be broken up somehow. Like, the word should be on its own line or something. :0

[scratchmist]

That's why I don't do poetry as much as I used to - it bleeds into prose (that, or my prose becomes more like poetry, so that the two are indistinguishable. Is that even a word?) Thanks for the crit, though. :D I think the lines might be uneven if I chop it, but I'll try it out.