Fall of Reason - Chapter 4/?

[satine_1984]

Author: satine_1984
Title: Fall of Reason
Genre: Angst/Romance
Rating: G - NC-17 (It depends on the chapter)
Word Count: ?

Comments

[zzzfreckles]

OMG I love this story so much and I also love the inter action between Reid and Natalie. Please update soon, your writing is wonderful!

[satine_1984]

That is so sweet. Thank you!!
I will update very soon, I promise. :)

[magsusa]

iIm really enjoying this story. Thanks for sharing. One thing; the use of the word "Mum" is distracting. I understand its use is common in many parts of the world, but absolutely not in Illinois, USA. And certainly not in the world of ATWT, where Luke Snyder has always used "Mom." A lot of fanfic authors do tho,s in and out of the US. I wonder why, since it's a very easy affectation to avoid.

[satine_1984]

OMG. Thank you so much for telling me about this! I hadn't even noticed. When I learned English at school we were taught British English so I'm used to the term "Mum". And you're right. A lot of Fanfic writers do so, too. But you made a point! In Illinois you say "Mom" and not "Mum". I didn't think of that. So big hugs for reminding me. I will change that in the following chapters. ;-)And I'm glad you're enjoying my story.

[magsusa]

Wow, your English is excellent! I'm probably one of the few who noticed the "Mum" thing cuz I was born and raised in Illinois. Keep up the great work. Thanks for contributing and making this community thrive.

[satine_1984]

Oh thank you. That's so sweet of you to say. i'm so glad that it doesn't get noticed that English is not my first language. ;-)