Fall of Reason - Chapter 4/?

[satine_1984]

Author: satine_1984
Title: Fall of Reason
Genre: Angst/Romance
Rating: G - NC-17 (It depends on the chapter)
Word Count: ?

Comments

[scotianova]

Reid and Natalie are adorable!

[satine_1984]

Thank you! :) I totally fell in love with the scene between Reid, Natalie and Ethan after the wedding that didn't happen. Natalie's so cute!! I just wish there would have been more scenes like that, so I thought I'd create one of my own. ;)

[sleeper6]

Natalie and Reid--this could be the start of a friendship, hee.

Oh, man, I felt Luke's awkwardness and confusion. Reid certainly isn't helping so I am very, very curious as to what will happen when they see each other again in the hospital or elsewhere.

Lily! I usually tolerate her but she can be very smothering, can't she?

Great update!

[satine_1984]

Haha. Yeah Lily can be quite smothering. She reminds me of my own mother in many ways, actually. That's probably why I find her very easy to write.
And Reid...he certainly wasn't a great help to Luke. So far, I only showed you Luke's point of view but that's gonna change in the next chapter so you get to see some of Reid's thoughts as well.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!

[amyafa]

I love Reid and Natalie. Especially the jerk are handsome warning.

I feel for Luke. He must feel so confused right now.

I love that you keep us in the dark with what could happen in the next chapter.
I really have no clue how this story will go on.

Thank you for sharing.

[satine_1984]

Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts!! I'm glad you liked this chapter. As to how the story will go on...there are so many ideas I have for this fic that I can only hope I won't make it too complex. Anyway...I'm so happy you keep following my story. :)

[bubbafrogz]

I love Reid's interaction with Nat, so honest! And it is true, when you think about it jerks are usually hotties. Oh Reid is so bad and so cute! I'm really concerned about you but let me tell you about my problems.

[satine_1984]

You're damn right and it's very unfair that the world is full of hot jerks. LOL
But Reid is and will always be the cutest jerk!!
Thank you very much for your great comment. :)

[kccalgal]

I know I've said it before but you have their character's down pat. Luke would have been a nervous wreck having Natalie and his mom almost walk in on him and Reid. Reid of course would have carried himself completely calm.

Reid and Nat were so cute!!!

Can't wait to see how much Luke spills to his mom. Great update!

[satine_1984]

Thank you so much! I'm trying hard to keep them in character and I'm glad it worked out. :)