Comments | sandymg: the thunderstorm came, J2 AU, 1/1, [PG-13]

sandymg

the thunderstorm came, J2 AU, 1/1, [PG-13]

Feb 17, 2011 22:36

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hurt/comfort, jensen/jared, jared padalecki, j2, rps, fanfic, the thunderstorm came, jensen ackles, romance, angst, au, beach verse, past indifferent seagulls, author: sandymg

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borgmama1of5 February 18 2011, 04:14:42 UTC

This is incredibly powerful. One of the most moving pieces you've written. So much characterization in the visual images!

sandymg February 18 2011, 04:16:59 UTC

It looks good all cleaned up. :) Thanks for the prompt to write something more with these boys. And for making it better!

the thunderstorm came mdlaw February 18 2011, 04:40:53 UTC

painful and beautiful m :)

Re: the thunderstorm came sandymg February 18 2011, 04:45:09 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked this.

fleeting_wings February 18 2011, 05:01:48 UTC

omgosh this broke my heart ;_; poor jensen. i totally understand his fear (though i haven't been traumatized like little jensen) because thunderstorms keep me awake with my heart racing a hundred miles an hour. so happy jay (and even danneel) is there for him. the cuddling is so sad and sweet.

my absolute favorite is your jared. so considerate and gentle, and telling jen he's the one that's scared of thunderstorms just to ease the tension, to be able to hold jen. love the original and this prequel so much.

sandymg February 18 2011, 05:12:25 UTC

Thanks so much. I'm delighted that you found this touching. I wasn't planning on revisiting Seagulls because it seemed like a complete story. But then I read another of Suchoon Mo's poems and inspiration struck. Oddly, I read the poem after I'd written the first story. This time he really served as muse.

Your saying you like this Jared is making me itch to write a Jared POV in this verse. Not sure when. Must get back to my Big Bang. But hopefully one day.

fleeting_wings February 18 2011, 05:49:55 UTC

yes. please. please. jared ;_; it's just so heartbreaking for me to think about what he went through during his relationship with jensen, before leaving to UCLA. jared's confusion and insecurities as well. idk. this is just a perfect story. and good luck on your big bang! :DDD

jesseofthenorth February 18 2011, 05:20:57 UTC

Excellent prequel to the original the together make up one my favorite things you've ever written.
The imagery is very well done.

sandymg February 18 2011, 05:23:21 UTC

Thank you! That's a lovely compliment. I found this poet and he's serving as muse. It's like his poetic style matches my sensibility for brevity.

Anyway, these have been challenging, so, thanks for saying you thought it worked.

jesseofthenorth February 18 2011, 05:29:49 UTC

he also wrote "on the winter beach" right?
very stark.
I like the fact that its so stripped down

sandymg February 18 2011, 05:31:21 UTC

Yes. Same poet. Lovely writing. Exactly. Stripped to its core. It's magical to me.

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qblackheart February 18 2011, 05:54:57 UTC

Oooh, this was very sweet. Loved it!

sandymg February 18 2011, 13:29:25 UTC

Thanks so much!