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aythia February 18 2011, 06:54:58 UTC
Oh dear, this really got to me. I feel so bad for Jensen! I'm myself terrified of thunder storms, he lightning is bad but the rumbling reduces me to a crying mess in no time and just the though of being treated like that when you're just a kid. Jeez. I'm an adult and I still can't handle that phobia well.

It was gorgeous, I love this 'verse, it's really breathtaking

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sandymg February 18 2011, 13:30:28 UTC
I don't mind storms too much. My kids are terrified so that part I wrote from experience. We usually play the game from The Sound of Music and all crawl into bed together :) Thanks for reading!

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peepingdru February 18 2011, 09:12:48 UTC
*blubbering*....speechless! Thank u::)))

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sandymg February 18 2011, 13:30:50 UTC
Sorry for the tears. I thank you for reading and I'm glad you liked it.

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tcs1121 February 18 2011, 11:30:14 UTC
I loved this, and the sequel. Having read them back to back made a moving a powerful picture.

Well done, sandy.

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sandymg February 18 2011, 13:31:26 UTC
Thanks very much! I'm glad you enjoyed the pair. Might revisit again. Not sure when but they've gotten under my skin now. I have a question--Did you read this story first? I don't think the prequel holds alone without having first read the original story (Seagull) so I'm curious. It's impossible for me to tell this on my own in a way.

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embroiderama February 18 2011, 14:05:44 UTC
This is really wonderful. I love the whole feel of it, Jensen's fear pushing beneath the surface and Jared just being there.

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sandymg February 18 2011, 14:09:19 UTC
Thank you. Both these stories are departures from my comfort zone and a little different so it's gratifying to hear they are working.

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wataru_kisugi February 18 2011, 14:43:37 UTC
This is another GREAT ANGST story from you.... just so heartbreaking and sad. You describe emotions and scenes vivid and perfect. I really LOVE this verse.

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sandymg February 18 2011, 16:10:16 UTC
Thank you. I appreciate your reading and letting me know you like these boys. I do hope to return to them again some day.

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