Stranded

[boblemon]

Title: Stranded
Rating: R
Pairing: Kamenashi/Nakamaru
Disclaimer: Johnny’s also owns KAT TUN.
Summary: Kame's love of hiking and Maru's fear of heights come together for unexpected results.
Note: This is for ryogrande, who donated to the fundraising for Japan drive on arashi_on. Thank you so much! And kisses to yarukizero for betaing and helping me get my facts straight. Also

Comments

[ryogrande]

TL;DR: PLEASE WRITE KAT-TUN FOREVER. KAME AND MARU ARE PERFECT. THIS IS PERFECT, THANK YOU SO SO MUCH. <3

now for quotes.

because he held a special place in his heart for Nakamaru

this is what, the third sentence? and already i was clutching my chest like a little old lady in AWWWWWWWWW. i love how you've completely expressed their dynamic in so few words, the opposite of the usual oldest/youngest.. :3 I LOVE IT.

glanced at Kame as if to say you’ll take care of me, right? and agreed to come.

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. :3 i seriously love how you wrote them, omg. so precious.

and Maru playing up his unmanliness as he faced the camera during their (frequent) breaks.

LOL how true this is. good thing it's part of his appeal. ;)

“Don’t worry, Maru. I won’t let you fall,” Kame replied, his impish attitude intact, and this time he didn’t pull his hand away when they started the next part

asldkjasldkasjd i just need to keep making a flaily wibble face because that's what i'm doing. THEY ARE HOLDING HANDS. <3

it really didn’t help when your

[ryogrande]

(at this point, Kame hadn’t even assumed that not being in top form was a possibility for himself; Maru was the one to worry about)

kame just cares so much about maru and i can feel it in his narrative, i really love how you write. :3 it shows in the way he touches maru and the wording used, like he's someone very precious to kame. ugh, my heart. :3

Next he pulled back the sleeve of Maru’s jacket and shirt underneath and pointedly examined his inner arm, then ran his fingers down the soft skin as if he needed to double check it for scratches and bruises that wouldn’t be apparent.

love it.

and I don’t want you to die Kazu!”

laskdasldjkas ;_; <3

“Plus if it gets dark, I have my flashlight!” Kame added in a slightly more energetic voice

oh god kame's forced attempt at positivity. i laughed.

(and maybe a little about the man next to him too)

icu kame. <3

AND THEN THEY SNUGGLE. <3333333333333 i love this so much, really. :3

[boblemon]

Wow! You're comments were amazing, I don't know where to respond. ^__^ I'm just so happy, because I wrote this for you after all, so that fact that you're so pleased with it means that it was a success. And you quoted stuff and made specific comments and that makes me so happy, because sometimes it's hard to tell what people like down to that much detail

[boblemon]

:DD Thank you for reading!

[alexxasick]

I don't usually read kat-tun fanfics XD but you know how I stalk you :P
and it's lovely :D

[boblemon]

>.< Thanks for reading! I don't really read kat-tun either. >.>;; Although I like their music a lot, and they're pretty fun to watch.