Stranded

[boblemon]

Title: Stranded
Rating: R
Pairing: Kamenashi/Nakamaru
Disclaimer: Johnny’s also owns KAT TUN.
Summary: Kame's love of hiking and Maru's fear of heights come together for unexpected results.
Note: This is for ryogrande, who donated to the fundraising for Japan drive on arashi_on. Thank you so much! And kisses to yarukizero for betaing and helping me get my facts straight. Also

Comments

[ryogrande]

(at this point, Kame hadn’t even assumed that not being in top form was a possibility for himself; Maru was the one to worry about)

kame just cares so much about maru and i can feel it in his narrative, i really love how you write. :3 it shows in the way he touches maru and the wording used, like he's someone very precious to kame. ugh, my heart. :3

Next he pulled back the sleeve of Maru’s jacket and shirt underneath and pointedly examined his inner arm, then ran his fingers down the soft skin as if he needed to double check it for scratches and bruises that wouldn’t be apparent.

love it.

and I don’t want you to die Kazu!”

laskdasldjkas ;_; <3

“Plus if it gets dark, I have my flashlight!” Kame added in a slightly more energetic voice

oh god kame's forced attempt at positivity. i laughed.

(and maybe a little about the man next to him too)

icu kame. <3

AND THEN THEY SNUGGLE. <3333333333333 i love this so much, really. :3

askl;daskdas;l SURPRISE SMUT i always forget an r rating can include sexytimes and i was PLEASANTLY SURPRISED to see it here! i love how it's casual and emotional at the same time, i can't quote this part but please know that i loved every bit of it. especially the nipple stimulation, you don't see that a lot in fic. kame being particular about where maru came seems very likely, too. xD

ugh, so hot. THANK YOU FOR GIVING ME SURPRISE SMUT. *________________*

He had thought that Maru was going to tell him something sexy like I wanted every inch of you.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA i can laugh freely now because i COULDN'T BEFORE, rofl. i read this at work on my lunch and that was not such a good idea. xD

but then Maru was kissing him again, caught up in the moment, and he kissed back because they would about to be rescued and lose the little intimate ball that had somehow been created while they were stranded on this mountain and he would have to face this in real life and who knew what was going to come of it.

aslkdjasldkjaslk i love this. :3

but finally he did and clung to Ueda as he emotionally broke in half).

omg i love maruda too and even this platonic intimacy here is breaking my heart. ;_; <3

okay wow i don't even know what else to say, i had no idea what to expect and i was just completely blown away with the quality and smut closeness here. please, please keep writing kat-tun, even if just a few of them. you are really good at it! i enjoyed this immensely, thank you so much for writing it. <3

[boblemon]

Wow! You're comments were amazing, I don't know where to respond. ^__^ I'm just so happy, because I wrote this for you after all, so that fact that you're so pleased with it means that it was a success. And you quoted stuff and made specific comments and that makes me so happy, because sometimes it's hard to tell what people like down to that much detail. :)

I'm not going to lie, I don't read much KAT TUN fanfiction, I just watch/listen to them, so what I wrote here is my impression of what it would be like between them if this happened. So maybe it's a good thing I wasn't spoiled by how this pairing is usually written...? And for me too, since I write so much Arashi, once this got going, Kame's personality and Maru's reactions were making me giggle even though I was the one writing it. So it was very refreshing for me personally as well.

Haha, yeah, getting stranded was supposed to be action, but I guess I didn't really make it far into the genre. >.>; And, the smut was sort of surprising, wasn't it? At first I felt like it didn't fit, but then after talking with yarukizero (who I owe a lot of the way this turned out to), realized that it fit in a random sort of way, just like them falling off the mountain, lol.

I wasn't sure what to expect either, but I'm happy that you're happy! So thank you for donating and leaving such a great comment on this to make me feel better. ^___^